FiguringOutLife

This was really interesting to read. I don't see a lot like this, and it was refreshing! We’ll only be young once, So just live a little. The 'just live ...

This was really great, and really emotional. Wonderful job. with more affection than I have felt- its love as drops of scarlet- the tears that fall from my eyes. The ...

This is pretty good! I enjoyed reading it. Could definitely feel the emotion coming off the page. You sense when I hurt, and Your pain, I feel it to. The ...

I really liked this! Painted a nice picture of what the person is going through and feeling. My favorite part - And I won't let this end In a hospital ...

I liked this a lot. Painting the image of a life of a man who has regrets, and I could feel his emotion through your words. Some men are made ...

I really enjoyed reading this, and the message it portrayed. I mean, what good does the outside world do, (question mark instead of comma) It lies and cheats and steals ...

Wow that had a lot of emotion in it- which I really enjoyed. It takes unblemished white plains and tears deep valleys as I hack. That stanza didn't make a ...

Very deep and thought provoking. I could tell a lot of emotion went into this. Couple suggestions... Try spacing out the lines and make some stanzas. I think it could ...

Hi! This is a really great and unique idea. What you say is completely true, words can be your greatest enemy and your best friend. I really liked how you ...

I really like how you are comparing this to an ocean. I am absolutely in love with the ocean and all it's beauty, so this was wonderful to read. Everything ...

This was enjoyable to read. I really liked the flow of it, and you painted a great picture in my mind. fighting bad with sword and lance. I think the ...

I like this. A little confusing at first, but once I read it twice it made sense. Makes me feel a very tranquil and lively sort of feeling. I think ...

This is really well done! I can most definitely relate to the feelings in this poem a lot of times. That's my favorite thing about this, is the emotion that ...