FerrumCorde

Yo I'm going to review this thing, alright so Let's slam this thing out. Ok first thing: the last two lines make absolutely No sense and are %120 unnecessary and ...

Ok despite the uncalled cursing this made my day. You used a very creative, humorous, sick twist to a Christmas story. Which was absolutely hilarious, and unexpected so kudos. However, ...

SO I really like all the words, they fit and go well together, and the title is really pretty. However, (it may just be me) some things don't make sense ...

Not really sure you got the point across. FIrst off I am assuming the "h" is hurt?? I think you might want to expand this or if it is longer, ...

So uhh I'm a bit.. confused. I thought this was about hell, but then I think it started talking about heaven. I like the "Ever wondered what "hell" felt like?" ...

Beside a few things, i think this was good. SO the first thing i really noticed was that it doesn't flow all that well. I'm kind of confused about this. ...

OMG so, I think I'm going to cry. Dude that was beautiful. Okay, so I thought that was some beautiful ish right there, but I'm a bit confused on what ...

...Well, definitely deserves to be put on the creepypasta website. However, there are various grammar mistakes. I think they stand out, so I will not go to specifics. I'm not ...

This is really funny! I love it! When it was under the category of humor, I was thinking it was put under the wrong category, but then I thought, oh ...

I think this is really good, except for the first stanza where you say "like a red rose, your mind is riddled with thorns" This indicates black roses don't have ...

This is a bit confusing, but confusing is good. It made sense as I continued to read, so that's also good! AT the beginning it said my parents, but most ...

Wow I really liked this! Especially because it's a Dr.Who theme c: I saw a few things that would make it a bit better, I think one thing that stands ...

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This was amazing, like wow when is the next one to be updated? But this is also a review!! First thing I noticed, is "en suite" used too casually. It ...