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Hey PurpleEurope! First of all, this poem was beautiful and the imagery you used helped me see what you were creating. Overall the spelling and punctuation were good. I did ...

Hey yubbies, Wow. First of all, reading about what happened made my eyes tear up. I can't believe that happened to you when you were in seventh grade. I'm in ...

Hey rbt00, Ummmm, wow. Great poem! It's beautiful, yet so true! I love the personification of having the star "stand above your window". Both grammar and spelling are fine. I ...

Okay Morticiansdaughter19! Here's that review I promised you! Okay, so I re-read what I had said before, and I realized it sounded really stupid, so, my apologies there. Okay, without ...

Hey Blackwood! I'm going to make this quick, because I have to go to school, and my mom is already nervous about being late. I might come back later and ...

Hey GriffinClaw, So short, so simple, yet so much meaning. Wow. Two lines can really say a lot, can't they? So much truth, and nothing more to say. You are ...

Hey. Um, wow. FCS here for 1 last review in the short 8 minutes we have left. Okay, so this short story made me want to know more about what's ...

Hey Imaginator17, Fellow team mate FCS here for a quick review! Alright, so first of all, it was a really great poem. The idea was really cool, and the way ...

Hey xxFleetingEternity! Alright, to start off this quick review, I'm going to say it was really interesting. The idea you had was really cool, although I think you could have ...

Hey Blackwood! Here to write a review tonight! Okay, so first off, great poem! I loved the idea, and it flowed wonderfully! However, I did notice that towards the end ...

Hey 0o0Redrum0o0, So, to start off I loved the way that you made the poem in the victim's POV. It added a whole different feel to the poem. Obviously, the ...

Hey Carina, Yeah. So, I loved the story. But, like cgirl1118 said I would have liked to know why all of Ash's friends were being tortured to the point of ...

Hey Sbintonti, Sorry if I spelled that wrong...Okay, so love the poem, mainly because I love coffee! I love the idea that you put the italics in there! It made ...

Hey TheWritersDream,. But, I think that suits it perfectly. Beautiful poem. Well, in it's own little way. I love the first stanza. It's perfect. I noticed that it's not following ...

Hey Dasiamari, Great poem. So real. Okay, I noticed how you switched on and off with punctuation. Rhyming was on and off as well. They all cry while inside they ...