FatCowsSis

Hello! Sis here to give you a review! Just a warning, I'm going to me more critical than EmeraldEyes was of your poem... So, you say that this is a ...

Hey again Renard!! First of all, nicely done. This is a really good poem. Short and sweet. Okay, so the first thing I noticed while reading was that it could ...

Wow! Beautiful poem! Rhyme. You changed the rhyming pattern in the fifth stanza. You had been using ABCB. But in the fifth stanza you changed to ABCC. Perhaps intentionally. If ...

Wow. This poem is powerful. Nicely done. Okay, so on with the review. Hmmm, probably the only thing I didn't necessarily like was, Your body walked with such precision that ...

Hello!! I'm here with a review, just for you!! First of all, this might be more of a pet peeve, but I noticed how you capitalized the beginning of the ...

Wow! Lots of time skipped. I'm baack!! 1 month later.... Haha okay here we go! Hmmmm, Luke's character is...interesting. So he really cares about Aaron enough to scare everyone because ...

I will admit, I'm no expert on novels, but I'm here for here we go! First off, this sentence: Luke has placed an ice pack on his brothers head where ...

Hey! I've wanted to review this poem since I read it so I thought, "Review Day!!!" I'm not sure if I've reviewed a poem of yours before, so I don't ...

Sis here, as promised. I'm going to jump right in to criticism (sorry) because we don't have a lot of time. Okay, so first off. Your opening. I was strolling ...

Hey niteowl! Sis here for a review! I don't remember if I've reviewed any of your poems before, so I'll explain how I do this. Pros and cons, my favorite ...

Hey! Sis here! I'm not going to go with my usual poem reviewing format, mainly because I'm tired as heck right now... Okay, so first off this was good. But ...

Hey Lylas! I'm here, as promised! Okay, so since I've never reviewed any poem of yours before I'll tell you how I do this. I'm going to write down a ...

Hey Hadj!! Okay, so since I've never reviewed any poem of yours before I'll tell you how I do this. I'm going to write down a list of pros and ...

You just want to make me beg for more, don't you? So, who is this mysterious group...what's IP with this prophecy? Questions, questions!! Loving the way you are writing this! ...

Hey Noelle! This is amazing! I love how you wrote this story! Okay, as for nitpicks go, I'm not going to bother repeating everything that Birkhoff said...It'll take up too ...