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Re: Drowning voices
I really love it. It tells you just how painful it is to have no voice and to not be heard. I could really feel the character's despair. And it ...
Apr 5, 2012 -
Re: deleted.
This is a really nice poem, I really love it! But you really need to work on capitalization. I know I shouldn't care...but I do(my OCD's coming out) other than ...
Apr 5, 2012 -
Re: Her
herself... sorry for not making that a little clearer...
Apr 3, 2012 -
Re: Girl
Wow. This is really good. And it kind of reminded me of, well, me. I'm the quiet girl at school that sits in the back and gets made fun of ...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Giving Up
This is really amazing! I loved the message behind it and it has a pretty good flow and when you read it, it really keeps you wondering. Keep it up!
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: A Chemical Imbalance
This is a really great song:3 I like this line "Prisoners of the sun" Keep it up!
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: ...
This is possibly the scariest thing I have ever read...
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Little Kid Adrenaline
This is really good:)
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: The Fallen Angel
Thanks! I will keep your words in mind when I continue it:)
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Your Story
your song is really good! You clearly have a knack for writing music:) keep it up!
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: The Messengers- Chapter 1
Great story! It's very descriptive! And at the top when I read "Pens and Knives" it reminded me of that song "Knives and Pens" by Black Veil Brides:)
Apr 2, 2012 -
Re: Like Stars in the Sky
Thank you! you helped a lot! And I'm still new to the whole poetry thing. I've always liked poetry but my specialty is short stories and novels. I never really ...
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: The Magic Coming Alive.
This is really good, and really descriptive too! When I read it, I could really see what was going on my head. Great job:)
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: Enchanted
Beautiful. Simply Beautiful.
Apr 1, 2012 -
Re: Like Stars in the Sky
thank you:D
Apr 1, 2012