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Strange here, and I found the oldest Green Room poem I can find. I'm pretty sure you're a sub-account of another account, but hey! I need to review.
First of all, you are obsessed with bicycles, I can tell. I did genuinely enjoy this poem. Nothing wrong with it, it was enjoyable. The format was spaced and nice. I thought this was going to be a scroll poem, but it wasn't. You just made it seem pretty long.
There are no cons. I liked it. Little kid adredaline? So, they could of fell of a cliff for who knows? This did have some emotion and realistic factor to it. I enjoyed that to. I spotted no problems what so ever. Just hope you can publish more poems yes? Humor poems maybe. You're Satan for Christ sakes. Great job at the poem. Do more.
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8.9/10
Good job
Keep writing
Stay Groovy
And have fun controlling demons!
This is really good:)
Thank you!