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FabihaNeera

FabihaNeera

  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Off the High Horse

    This is a nicely written poem! It's very humorous... especially at the parts where the poor man has to scoop the poop xD But, I guess it's not too bad ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Problems

    This is really well-written! The title and description really attracted me to read this because it's such a relatable topic for many of us. Your lines are simple and to ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Your Lies

    This is nicely done! Each line flowed really well together... and I can feel the raw emotion from this because of each line being voiced as the character's thoughts. Using ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: With a Whisper

    This is a really nicely-written poem! The amount of imagery and emotion conveyed from this really enhanced a theme of desire. I especially like the part where u specifically use ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: you started talking and i listened

    Hello there, I just want to say that that is really, really good! Every line is so deep with emotions of hurt, anger, loneliness... it was all conveyed so powerfully. ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A Declaration of Love

    This is a wonderful poem! The poetic devices used really added to the emotion being conveyed, and you used a great sense of imagery too. I especially like the lines ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Mistaken

    Wow, I love this! It related relates to me so much... I'm fact I think this relates to a lot of people. I actually like how u defined the word ...

    Apr 10, 2019
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: The Sleeping Beauty Sonnet

    Hi Morgan, This is really good! It really feels like I'm being put into the world of Sleeping Beauty in my mind... and the emotion conveyed from the eyes of ...

    Apr 9, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Running in the Cold

    Hi Terian, This is a really well-written poem! I love the beautifully dramatic story told, and you were also able to keep up with rhymes! This piece has great imagery... ...

    Apr 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: fragmented like my self-esteem

    I really like this short poem because... well as mentioned in the type... it's realistic. I really think this is something we can all relate to at some point. The ...

    Apr 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Scared

    This is a well-written poem reflecting emotions I'm sure all of us feel. I could feel what was being conveyed from this poem, and I like how you consistently started ...

    Apr 9, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Truth

    This poem is truly well-written... it really uses a great sense of imagery and metaphors to get the message across. I love the formatting of this - you used emphasis ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Broken

    This poem is so very deep and emotional... I could feel every line spoken. This is indeed sad and heartbreaking, and I also think it's very relatable. Each line flows ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Rabbit and the Hen

    I generally like reading fables, and this is a nicely written one! Though there are some typos... I think the moral is presented clearly. I've never heard this one before, ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems

    This is a really great idea... combining haikus to form a short story! Sometimes, it can be difficult to get a message across in such few syllables and lines, and ...

    Apr 8, 2019


Owning our story can be hard but not nearly as difficult as spending our lives running from it. Embracing our vulnerabilities is risky but not nearly as dangerous as giving up on love and belonging and joy—the experiences that make us the most vulnerable. Only when we are brave enough to explore the darkness will we discover the infinite power of our light.
— Brené Brown