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Re: Off the High Horse
This is a nicely written poem! It's very humorous... especially at the parts where the poor man has to scoop the poop xD But, I guess it's not too bad ...
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Re: Problems
This is really well-written! The title and description really attracted me to read this because it's such a relatable topic for many of us. Your lines are simple and to ...
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Re: Your Lies
This is nicely done! Each line flowed really well together... and I can feel the raw emotion from this because of each line being voiced as the character's thoughts. Using ...
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Re: With a Whisper
This is a really nicely-written poem! The amount of imagery and emotion conveyed from this really enhanced a theme of desire. I especially like the part where u specifically use ...
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Re: you started talking and i listened
Hello there, I just want to say that that is really, really good! Every line is so deep with emotions of hurt, anger, loneliness... it was all conveyed so powerfully. ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: A Declaration of Love
This is a wonderful poem! The poetic devices used really added to the emotion being conveyed, and you used a great sense of imagery too. I especially like the lines ...
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Re: Mistaken
Wow, I love this! It related relates to me so much... I'm fact I think this relates to a lot of people. I actually like how u defined the word ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: The Sleeping Beauty Sonnet
Hi Morgan, This is really good! It really feels like I'm being put into the world of Sleeping Beauty in my mind... and the emotion conveyed from the eyes of ...
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Re: Running in the Cold
Hi Terian, This is a really well-written poem! I love the beautifully dramatic story told, and you were also able to keep up with rhymes! This piece has great imagery... ...
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Re: fragmented like my self-esteem
I really like this short poem because... well as mentioned in the type... it's realistic. I really think this is something we can all relate to at some point. The ...
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Re: Scared
This is a well-written poem reflecting emotions I'm sure all of us feel. I could feel what was being conveyed from this poem, and I like how you consistently started ...
Apr 9, 2019 -
Re: The Truth
This poem is truly well-written... it really uses a great sense of imagery and metaphors to get the message across. I love the formatting of this - you used emphasis ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: Broken
This poem is so very deep and emotional... I could feel every line spoken. This is indeed sad and heartbreaking, and I also think it's very relatable. Each line flows ...
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Re: The Rabbit and the Hen
I generally like reading fables, and this is a nicely written one! Though there are some typos... I think the moral is presented clearly. I've never heard this one before, ...
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Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems
This is a really great idea... combining haikus to form a short story! Sometimes, it can be difficult to get a message across in such few syllables and lines, and ...
Apr 8, 2019
