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FabihaNeera

  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Rivera

    I really, really love this poem! You used beautiful imagery and metaphors... it was simply well-written. You did an amazing job at conveying emotions to the reader... I could really ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: In the eye of failure

    This is a beautiful poem! The title was the first to capture my EYE, and after reading through, I think it suits the poem really well. I could really feel ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ignoring Grief

    Wow, I really love how well-written this poem is! In just a few words, you were able to convey a very realistic view of what grief can feel like when ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flavors of Life

    This is a really nicely written poem! I like the writing style, imagery, poetic devices, everything! The way you even formatted the text on the page adds the effect in ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Watching

    I don't think I understand your view of this poem... it is really nicely written! I believe the idea is of loss, and I could really feel the emotion being ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Like A Rose

    Hey EagleFly, This is a beautifully written poem! I didn't expect it to be so long, but I think you really kept me hooked on throughout the entire thing. I ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: It's Gray!!

    This is a really well-written short story! I love how you took a simple idea of a character preparing for their first day of school and turned it into something ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: lost

    This poem conveys a lot of imagery, and I really enjoyed reading it! I like the limited number of words you used in each line to really add effect to ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Autumn winds

    This is a really nicely written poem! I love the imagery and metaphors of this, and it describes my favorite season beautifully. I especially like the second stanza, where you ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: What

    Hello, I love this poem! It really gets the readers to ponder over each line - of course, because they are all questions! I think there are deeper meanings and ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I dont know

    This is a nicely written poem - containing raw emotion and feeling! The message of this poem is relatable to anyone, and I like that you could write a poem ...

    Apr 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The leaving of a Lover

    Even with three lines, the message of this poem is deeply meaningful of how painful and emotional this scenario can be for anyone. I could definitely feel a tugging inside ...

    Apr 7, 2019
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Thosand Years

    I REALLY love the lyrics of this song. It's super original, creative and also very touching. The song title represents the idea of your song really well, and it especially ...

    Apr 7, 2019


if ya mention chickens, i have to show up, that is the law.
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