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Re: Rivera
I really, really love this poem! You used beautiful imagery and metaphors... it was simply well-written. You did an amazing job at conveying emotions to the reader... I could really ...
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Re: In the eye of failure
This is a beautiful poem! The title was the first to capture my EYE, and after reading through, I think it suits the poem really well. I could really feel ...
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Re: Ignoring Grief
Wow, I really love how well-written this poem is! In just a few words, you were able to convey a very realistic view of what grief can feel like when ...
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Re: The Flavors of Life
This is a really nicely written poem! I like the writing style, imagery, poetic devices, everything! The way you even formatted the text on the page adds the effect in ...
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Re: Watching
I don't think I understand your view of this poem... it is really nicely written! I believe the idea is of loss, and I could really feel the emotion being ...
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Re: Like A Rose
Hey EagleFly, This is a beautifully written poem! I didn't expect it to be so long, but I think you really kept me hooked on throughout the entire thing. I ...
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Re: It's Gray!!
This is a really well-written short story! I love how you took a simple idea of a character preparing for their first day of school and turned it into something ...
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Re: lost
This poem conveys a lot of imagery, and I really enjoyed reading it! I like the limited number of words you used in each line to really add effect to ...
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Re: Autumn winds
This is a really nicely written poem! I love the imagery and metaphors of this, and it describes my favorite season beautifully. I especially like the second stanza, where you ...
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Re: What
Hello, I love this poem! It really gets the readers to ponder over each line - of course, because they are all questions! I think there are deeper meanings and ...
Apr 8, 2019 -
Re: I dont know
This is a nicely written poem - containing raw emotion and feeling! The message of this poem is relatable to anyone, and I like that you could write a poem ...
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Re: The leaving of a Lover
Even with three lines, the message of this poem is deeply meaningful of how painful and emotional this scenario can be for anyone. I could definitely feel a tugging inside ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: Thosand Years
I REALLY love the lyrics of this song. It's super original, creative and also very touching. The song title represents the idea of your song really well, and it especially ...
Apr 7, 2019
