FLyerS

I like you. You can defend yourself. And I am glad you have no wish to retaliate. Mature. That being said: I still don't think this poem was in any ...

In my esteemed opinion fiction903 is full of beans. This poem was scary without talking of death. It was sad without talking of heartbreak. Wow.

Beautiful. The way it was arranged was lovely. Almost.... floral. I felt connected to the narrator. I was on their team.

It was ok. I was bord. Write something not about love

I enjoyed this. It was... truthful. Expand.

Accurate use of the term whore. For this I will not shank you for writing love poetry Don't do it again.

Expand on the stillborn idea, don't just use it as an analogy, use it as the situation.

Good title Suckish poem. I know what your poems lack. Originality. Try to write a poem by yourself from now on. Stay away from the love theme.

I like it. It makes my tummy twinkle. It tastes like bubble gum.

This poem has no plot. Whatsoever. none. It doesn't have a beginning or end, or even middle. It is a sentence. It has good feeling, so it is a little ...

I really liked the format on this poem, The way it came to a literal climax, and then descended into a resolution. It was perfect for the feeling, the almost-numbness ...

Good morning. Your poem was good. It held a certain bitter-sweetness. As the the narrator was healing the other, she was healing herself. Well written.

First off, I liked how you took conventional sayings, and changed the tenses or grammar. I also liked the secondary name, in bold. I think you should make that the ...

I think you should have stopped the poem half way through. After that it just got repetitive, and at the end...clingy. Don't act like that in real life. Guess what? ...

I interpreted it as a dead body, that the narrator knew, but there was hope that the soul previously in the body would be born again. But I don't know... ...