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What is with the drug poems today? These powerful poems can be so... emotionally draining. (That's a good thing in a poem) In poems with a painful feel, I usually ...

Wow. That was... Heroin- ee? It made me uncomfortable, and that is the beauty of it. It started with ecstasy, then spiraled down into dirtiness, Just like how I imagine ...

I love the blues. So this sits good with me, but I think you need to incorporate a chorus into your song. Something that makes sense after all the stanzas. ...

Emo. Totally emo. Aside from the emo-ness I liked it. I thought It was interesting, but in the middle, where you say "with a gun to my head" it was ...

Kewl story. I think it needs a bit of work though. If you Explain more about the owl being what else it is, then the story will feel more completed ...

Very anti-normal. I don't necessarily agree with with what is said in this poem, But it sounds like the "Father" is trying to lead the "son" on the wrong path. ...

Wow that is amazing. I really liked this. I especially liked your hidden reference to the statue of liberty. Good job. You could however, improve it by condensing, and therefore ...

Watch the grammar that wasn't very good and it distracts from the flow of the poem its like going on and on even though there is a natural pause such ...

DING DING DING Acceptable love poem award goes to: Ignacia!!!! WOOOOOOOO Check some other love poems I have reviewed. You will see what an honor this is. In the tenth ...

This is much better. Not totally energy-sucking. Although, as it is a poem about doing nothing, there's nothing doing. No interest. No POP. Expand on the poem. Think on the ...

Hello Animia, I hate love poems. The language in this one was awkward. Overall, I didn't like it. I'm going easy on you 'cuz your a newb. You can do ...

Wow. That poem was not powerful. It was not unique. It was not even very emotional. Barely sentimental. Pathetic. Yeah, I'm cruel. Very cruel. But it was horrible. In my ...

I liked it. It didn't have a fixed rhythm, but it was rhythmic. It made me feel... like all in this life is for nothing, because the Fox will get ...

This would be a good song, but as it is about love, it wouldn't be a good poem. You chose the right forum. Thank you. This song is... pure emotion. ...

The picture and the story don't go together. The poem is about a demon-creature, or that's what it sounds like, bringing pain to human souls. The picture is of a ...