Evangelina

Ahh. Well, I don't know about the foundation...thanks for reading!

Thank you very much! Glad to know I did well. Haven't written this type of poetry in a while.

I love it! I see myself in here and the imagery and word usage is astounding. However, I don't see where its going. For the boy....what? Or is it more ...

I'm not creating a suspicion...CS Lewis said it himself.

I know. The whole point of fantasy is for it to be fantastic, out of bounds, different...

disire = desire moarne = mourne You don't suck :] I just think it needs to be expanded. -huggles- -evangelina

Not a star to be seen. Only blackness to my eye. ^ this is rather sticcato in a way that doesn't work. It's also a bit boring, and doesn't flow. ...

Hehe. Thanks so much Adam! Glad I could make you laugh.

Haha. Poirot is so funny. With his french accent. The actors British, you know. It's all rather brilliant.

Gossip Girl is a sad excuse for Literature. The pants on the other hand is quite entertaining.

It's quite a unique plotline, I'll give it that...

I loved it! But then...I think I got too old for them...

The young man was young. Lol. Too funny.

I hate eragon, the book. I can't say exactly why, except I was bored.

The beginning didn't drag me in, but it was a very well-written and deep-meaning peice.