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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Racing the Firebird

    Hey guys, let me know what you think of [a] title[s] for this piece. I don't really have any idea, so feel free... Oh, just thought of another one, "Racing ...

    Feb 17, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Death Avenue

    Thanks. I think I was trying to touch on the machine of society here....? I was in a depressing mood at the time. Of course, reading Doctor Zhivago probably didn't ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Let It Come

    I guess I couldn't say enough with just one post... I really agree with what you are saying. I have a poem that has been underway for the past year. ...

    Nov 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Those Who Are Nameless - Chapter I

    Thanks! I wasn't quite sure how this chapter would turn out, but I'm glad that you like it. I'll keep trying to post these as often as I can.

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Those Who Are Nameless: Prologue

    This is not my first attempt at a fantasy novel, but the first one I intend to keep working on. Please help me by letting me know what really engages ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Beautiful

    Just for clarification.... Not bragging, just saying something that is probably true. Did not mean to ruffle any feathers. The part of the Bible you [Flower~Child] would be looking for ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Psalm of the Wanderer

    You know, it's comforting to know that many of you are liking this poem... Even more comforting is the idea that we're all headed the same place...

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Truth

    You, sir, are way too good for your own good! This is a beautiful poem, just like the rest of the things you've written before. I'm glad to see another ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Albatross

    Thanks for the support on "winging"... I do agree, an artist has room for creativity and invention, no matter the art. This was just a quick attempt on some more ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Armada of the Damned

    You may want to then consider mentioning duty somehow in the poem since the meaning is kind of difficult to figure out. The grim brutality of war is well represented, ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ultimatum

    If you check out several of my poems, this not having commas issue has risen more than once. I absolutely despise commas in poetry, so don't take it personally when ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Writer's Block

    The writer's block that I am always plagued with is not a complete block of ideas, only a partial one. I get an idea for maybe one line of a ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ultimatum

    Yes, the language at the end of the poem is Latin. If there's anyone who knows much about Latin, feel free to help me out. I just went online and ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Crossroads

    Wow... The picture painted here is absolutely beautiful... I like the words you use, they are so suited for this. I do think that this should probably be a narrative ...

    May 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Nightrise

    Fortissimo, I just like red font and this was the second one of mine you'd reviewed. So, no, you're not missing anything. And yes, I've been writing for quite a ...

    May 4, 2011


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote