EtCetera

'Ello! It's been a while since I gave anyone a review, so here's some of my personal changes and observations, starting from the top. 1. I would try out "wielded" ...

Sorry to be different, but maybe you'll be relieved to hear that I don't really think that this poem is very funny at all. I really do feel for the ...

Sorry guys, us awesome manly-man poets don't always get the girls. Hope I'm not shattering dreams. But when you don't [kind of like what Poller Bear is doing/going through] you ...

I really like the word choice you employed in this poem... It was very much something that as a fellow writer I could relate to. This is a perfect example ...

I really enjoyed the feel of this poem; dark, deep, and awesome. Abid is right, your structure is very good in this poem. I think that this may be one ...

This is a very interesting poem. You really use some fantastic imagery, but the poem seems like it's mostly fragments of feelings. You really used the feelings of the poem ...

A very engaging scene, I must say. A few things bubbled up in my mind while reading this, though. 1) You said the Garak was "roughly 9 feet tall." Then ...

So I really enjoyed reading your poem. It had a really cool idea and a very nice rhythm... until I hit this line. To a boy from a foreign land. ...

I must say that I really liked what you were writing about. It really gives an intensity to your work. But, I must be nit-picky... I'm not really sure about ...

This was well written, I must say... It had a very nice rhythm and you kind of tried to rhyme, though I didn't catch the scheme. Now, about what you ...

I couldn't find any words that were really stale, but your rhythm or construction of the piece seems a little off to me. Some of it I could catch ,but ...

Wow. Very intense. Understand this as a compliment since this is pretty much all the kind of poetry I write. You really get the point across that you [or the ...

Wow.... well done. I must say that you captured the whole point of demons very well... I really like the free verse style that you use in this and how ...

I guess I misunderstood the concept of slam poetry, but this one is very cool. I really liked the uniqueness of the whole poem. The whole idea behind it was ...

I like it... To all those who haven't picked up on it, I heartily approve of ignoring some punctuation in poetry. It can character to the piece. This poem is ...