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Re: Stay With Me Senpai
Hey there. I haven't reviewed anything in quite a while so I apologise in advance if it ain't that good... Anyway, Let us start, shall we. First I'd like to ...
Mar 19, 2016 -
Re: The Other Girl
Hey, Neverland here to review!! Okay, wow, I can really relate to this piece. Like, wow. I ain't gonna spill my stupid story cause you ain't here to read it ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Writing Prompt Response: You wish to a genie that all of humanity would gain super powers. || 623 words
Hey, it's Neverland here to review your piece! First off, for someone who's supposedly 'rusty' you did quite well. Nitpicks: "Some barmy little guy just like you" This should be ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: Mine.
Hey, it's Neverland here to review your poem. I really liked the idea of this piece. You put the right amount of emotion into this piece but not too much ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: don't break hearts, break minds
Hey! It's Neverland here to review!! First off I'd just like to say, good job, I really, really enjoyed this poem. *claps* Just wow. Loved. It. Like, alot. This needs ...
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: It's Him
Hey, it's Neverland here to review your piece!! I gotta say, the piece you've written here is sweet. I can kinda relate to this piece, I met this guy, and ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Falling Solo
Hey, it's Neverland here to review your piece! First off, I really liked it! It was very emotional as the 'people' and @LuckyPanda2301 said. I myself like poems, but short ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Okay
Hey, it's Neverland here to review your wondrous (to me that should be spelt wonderous....) piece! Okay, and onto the review!! I liked this, but to be honest the title ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: This isn't revenge, it's love
0-0 Hi, it's Neverland here to review. 0-0 I don't know how I can review this, but here goes. I absolutely loved this piece. So much!! The beginning, the story ...
Nov 24, 2014 -
Re: Darkness.
Hey! It's Neverland here to review your work! Before I start the actual reviewing I'd just like to say congrats for already posting and it's only your second day here. ...
Nov 4, 2014 -
Re: White As Snow
Hey it's Neverland here to review your piece!! Oh my gosh!!!! I love it!!! ALOT!!! Though I would fix up one thing. Only one. The spacing. I think that it ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: Fragrant Rose
Hey It's Neverland here to review!! I really like this poem. It's different and I really like the setting out, it look really nice. Even though this is simple you ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: For Somebody That I Know And Love And Will Continue To Know And Love
*Now creeps slowly over and waves cautiously to you* Hi. I read Lisa's piece and when I saw yours I needed to read it, too. And just like hers I ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: A Letter Better Unsent
Hey, It's Neverland here to ... I don't feel right saying review... I don't know what then... Hi. I'm not to sure I can find any 'faults' in this, though ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: 10 Things That Someone Special Has Taught Me
*Creeps slowly over and waves cautiously* Hi. I feel awful for reviewing this because I feel like I don't have a right.... BUT I JUST CAN'T HELP MY SELF!! Now ...
Jul 21, 2014