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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 28
Hmm...It's true. I'll edit this as soon as possible. You know, the college busy-ness. Thank you so much for the review, Aley, my friend!
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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 25
Heya, my friend! Thank you so much for the review! I'll try to edit it and make it even more nice.
Jul 11, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 2
Oh, thank you so much, my friend! I am glad that you liked it. The terrible would be somewhere around the chapter 17th... But the ending is happy one. Hope ...
Jul 10, 2016 -
Re: Hatred~ Chapter 1: Bullied.
Hmm...I am planning to add more incidents full of bullying, but in the next chapters. The ending is going to be a big blast and beyond imagination. And...the editing has ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Hatred~ Chapter 1: Bullied.
Thank you so much, Mona! The grammar has been edited now. The bad boys are calling the place to be "patent" because the last bench in the corner was like ...
Jul 6, 2016 - Re: Miss you so much... Jul 1, 2016
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Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 1
Oh, thank you so much for such a lovely review! I am glad that you liked it. Well...I am not British, so take it the other way. Yes, you will ...
Jun 28, 2016 -
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Thank you so much for the review, The Swordsman! Thanks for correcting me! :D
Jun 28, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Heya, Sofie!! Thank you so very much for ths sweet review!! They are all just beautiful suggestions! I'll definitely add this here!! Thanks a loot, friend!!
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Heya, Sofie!! Thank you so very much for ths sweet review!! They are all just beautiful suggestions! I'll definitely add this here!! Thanks a loot, friend!!
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Thank you so much for the review, Zee!! Well, I have described Loa Loa in the very chapter. And regarding the looks of the aliens they would be described from ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Rule Of The Alien Queen...
Hmm... thats very true. I should add the sounds, smell and feels. I'll try to edit this soon. Thank you so very much for the review!! Imma glad that you ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 23
Hmm... yes. I'll definitely do the editings and chage the dialogues into a summary. Well...the lawn wasn't sloped. There was a slope where they were standing. The manager tried to ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 23
Hello, my friend! Nopes...I am never bored to see my friends reviewing again and again. Infact, I like it. What I thought is that anyone who holds a higher degree ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 20
Thank you so much for the review, Lizzy! Hmm... I'll do the changes reagrding the thoughts. And, yes. You are correct about the assumptions. Marldon is the dead guy, but ...
Jun 27, 2016
