ErinYount

Hey, Erin here to review. Wow this one was seriously amazing. Well first thing, you took the two of my favorite literary characters and you didn't just use them. but ...

Hi, Erin here to review. I dont have much to say about your writing style, or anything like that, because I liked it. No critique there. I likes the idea ...

Hi, Erin here to review. I sort of have a thing against the line "Maybe people should stop poisoning themselves". Apart from my personal opinion about it, as a reader, ...

Hi. First of all, I super like your piece. There isnt much to review or say about it, because it is so good. It is short, and it's beauty lies ...

Hi. I really liked your piece, and when I say that, I mean I really really liked it. So, i'll begin by saying that the structure you chose was a ...

Hi KittyBee, Well for starters, I really liked your piece. The idea behind it, is wonderful. The way you've executed the idea is powerful. Short sentences really help with sinking ...

Hi, Erin here to review here for you. I liked your piece in general. I'll begin with a few nitpicks: "I would be lost from sight"... as a sentence didn't ...

Hi. I loved this. I like the structure the most, for starters. Then I like the two main lines you've repeated so much: "I – want to be free and ...

Hi. For starters: "Maybe, just maybe, One day I'll reach him. And then he'll smile at me, And maybe we'll even talk. I'd like that." gave me goosebumps. I really ...

Hi. Erin here to review. I like the idea behind the piece, but honestly, the piece didn't work for me that much. Not that I didn't like it. I liked ...

Hi, So I extremely love this piece. The first thing I am doing after writing this review is sending a link to my "Ashley" (please tell me you know what ...

Hi. I think your piece was wonderful. It was a very risky piece to write, because there is nothing happening, or really taking place in the piece, no action at ...

Hi. So, I like the expression behind the piece a lot. I come from the same place of being alone and feeling lonely, more often then I like to talk ...

Hi. So, I'll firrst go with the parts I really like: "a long-forgotten chaos that surrounds you." "she’s the train wreck that you just can’t stop staring at " "a ...

Hi. I liked the piece. I won't say, honestly, that it "took my breath away", but it felt really good. So, the best lines first: "Honey, don’t you care about ...