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Hello there, Rebecca! First of all, I would like you to know that I am quite satisfied with this first chapter. It introduced your characters beautifully and it also gave ...

Dearest Strange, I find your poem quite bewildering a beautiful in its simplicity. The few details here and there, mixed with interesting questions such as: "What will become of us, ...

Dearest Felistia, What a wonderful poem! I must say, for a moment there I could actually feel the ice cold wind and hear Drilver's powerful roar in the distance. Anyway, ...

Hello there, Emma! To begin with, I'd like you to know that you have all the components that make a short story wonderful. Each of your sentences either advances the ...

Hello there, Hiraeth! To begin with I want you to know that this is, in my opinion, one of the best chapters chapters I have read in this site. This ...

Hello there, felistia! When I finished this little poem, I was mind blown. I believe what you're trying to express is that, although African people have suffered greatly, they're still ...

Hello there, Dream! Now, this is a very well executed second chapter. I could feel Everlasting's agony at watching so many people be killed, and I like how that will ...

Hello there, Hiraeth! Before I begin I'd like you to know that, to me at least, this is a wonderful chapter and as I read it, I could see that ...

Hello there, Songmorning! You have a very interesting novel here! But before I go into detail, I'd like to congratulate you on something very specific. I'm Catholic, and I didn't ...

Hello there, Niteowl! This is a very clever short story, I must say. The vocabulary, organization and dialogue couldn't be better. Your word choice is superb. And in less than ...

Hello there, Dreamworx95! (Lovely avatar, by the way. Princess Leia is my hero :) !) Kurt Vonnegut, a very famous writer, says “Be a sadist. No matter how sweet and ...

Hello there! I agree with you when you say this is one of your best. I love the descriptions of the poem. Even if they're short and simple, they have ...

Hello there, Sagitta! This is a very heart felt and well written poem! And I love how it doesn't give you a lot of boring details as to the lover's ...

Hello there, Madwriter! You shouldn't have apologized earlier, for this a very deep and touching poem. And of course I can relate to the narrator! But moving on to what ...

Hello there, DragonWriter! What a wonderful short story you have here! Oh, and how cleverly written it is! The word choice is simply superb, the details are just enough to ...