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I like the way it flows and how well it is written but I couldn't quite tell what was going on in this poem could you tell me? Eyes open ...

Im sad for my friend, he and I are very close he keeps hearing voice's in his head saying how dissapointing,what a bum and failure he's turned out to be ...

Boulevard of Broken Dreams I wander through the dark, Dreams searing through my mind. This eternal hell of nightmares, What humans dread and fear. I can never escape this devil’s ...

I lay in wait for I know my fate when I return to the skies they will surely see through my lies my wings will be teared from me with ...

Lost Walking down a road, People watching me. Wishing for my abode, Needing to think clearly. How did I get here? My mother once said, “You’ll find your place my ...

When you write it’s hard to realize; The reader’s not inside your head. They don’t know what you know. All they have is what they’ve read. Love this stanza Their ...

T he feeling of death darkly. F eet knocking floor. O ne two , one two pause and swig. H eart hidden deep. He stumbles in, bronze Liquor, rotting tongue/mind. ...

T he chimes are ladders of glass, Like this bit music climbing their rungs as remove as the sparrow flicks her wings at them in flight, hovering breathless in the ...

Awesome one, Cool way to use a poem :) :shock: where is SweetMoments

This poem truly is a peice of art, I could hear and see exactly what the dog could. To be honest (and a bit pathetic) I almost cried. I can't ...

I love how the poem goes in full circle to the end and repeats the first stanza very beautiful. And I know you’re watching me too And I know you ...

Vice. One a day became three, she was upset at me, she hated me. Take out at me it crowds the sentance But all of us have our vice and, ...

First of all I love this poem! Good work. Until then I’d just like for you to know It isn’t your touch, but the seeds that you sow. Love this ...

Like shiney said this is a very commonly used theme but i loved the way you worded your poem and the way that you used your layout, it i made ...

I like this poem but I find how the ending line for each stanza is similar destracts it from the actual part of the poem although that is my opinian ...