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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: More Than A Friend

    Hello judyg3710, I understand the feeling that you are trying to express in this poem and the message is conveyed very beautifully through your excellent language and way of phrasing ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bending Flower

    Hello Mirasol, It feels great to finally bloom; to raise your head to the sun; to watch the stars and moon. The first stanza is a really nice introduction to ...

    Dec 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It is yesterday

    Hello RachaelElg, You are definitely a talented flash writer, this was a really well balanced flash story which was short but had a nice amount of description and actually told ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Six Love Questions

    Hello Deanie, That was a really lovely poem! It was so sweet and incredible touching and after I'd finished reading it I was just so impressed, this is definitely something ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Private Feeling

    Hello Formslipper, This is an interesting poem that you have here and it definitely has loads of potential. It's a really interesting concept and I like the thought and depth ...

    Nov 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Eyes Like The Ocean

    Hello creativityrules, Let me start by saying that was a wonderful poem, I love the depth in your words and the clear picture that you managed to paint in my ...

    Nov 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm Not My Name

    Hello StoryWeaver13, Ooooh I really liked this for sure and i loved how short, sweet and simple it was and you managed to write a really meaningful poem with just ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Let it Grow

    Hello murtuza, Wow, that was a really good poem. You turned a trees growth into something more than what is was and you made it sound more beautiful and deep ...

    Oct 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Hidden, Buried, Forgotten

    Hello Boolovesyou, I quite liked this poem, it was an interesting concept and I liked the detail and flow of this. The imagery and language were both amazing and insipring ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Veneer

    Hello amygabb, In truth I didn't really understand this. Once I started reading I did want to read on but after I had finished I wasn't really sure how I ...

    Oct 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wildflowers

    Hello Incognito, Wow, that was honestly a really interesting story and I liked your interesting take on something so simple and plain. I enjoyed the depth that you went into ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Practice Makes Perfect

    Hello Sionarama, I liked this quite a lot and it is a very interesting story. I like the description at the start and the way the story was simple and ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Answer me.

    Hello w0nd3rstruck, I'll admit, this was quite a confusing poem. I didn't really understand it the first time I read it because everything seemed to almost contradict itself with another ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Little Sister

    Hello Vettan, Oh my gosh that was such a beautiful poem! I felt so absorbed in your poem the whole way through and I want to just sit here and ...

    Oct 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Consumed

    Hello mollycarraway, First of all congratulations on getting featured, this is a really nice poem and you definitely deserved it. I truly enjoyed reading it and I loved the deep ...

    Oct 8, 2011


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