EnchantedPanda

Hello luckystar3000, Clearly you've experienced problems when trying to format this. It goes almost without saying that poetry always has some sort of layout to it and it's extremely rare ...

Hello ShadowVyper, You've chosen a quite common subject choice for the basis of your poem. I have lost count of the amount of pieces of writing I have read about ...

Hello unmarkedterritory, Firstly may I say that this was a really good poem that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. It is fairly obvious the message you are trying to get across ...

Hello Actress4evr, This was an incredibly powerful and emotional piece of writing and I can really see your own opinions and thoughts showing in this writing. I enjoyed the messages ...

Hello Tenyo, This was such a sweet poem; I was completely absorbed whilst reading and I found the simplicity truly helped make this an incredibly powerful piece of poetry. It ...

Hello BrokenSkye, This was sweet and cute but also a little bit too cliche for my liking. This idea that you've used is honestly far too overused and the way ...

Hello UrbanNomad, It's DreamingForever here to review your lovely poem! This was obviously a very short and simple poem. I think you tried to use that to your advantage though ...

Hello tgirly, It's DreamingForever here to review your poem! I have to say that you have an excellent start here and although it was a very short and simple poem ...

Hello qaralynn, It's dreaming person here to review!

Hello ACTRESS, You have a really decent start here and I like the topic which you have chosen to write about. I felt though, that you didn't make this as ...

Hello Laminated, I don't have much practice reviewing words but I'll give this a go. Please excuse the length of this, I would write more but it is difficult to ...

Hello sindhu98, As far as the poem itself went it was actually quite good. Most of what you wrote was meaningful and the message was sweet. I felt though, that ...

Hello Mickixoxo, This is an interesting start that you have here and although this will be difficult to review as there isn't much substance I will give you my general ...

Hello WrittenInStone, It slips between interlocked fingers, as grains of sand slide to the base of an hourglass. It is as elusive as the air we breath, as might a ...

Hello Searria H., That short and simple but at the same time very moving. The beauty behind your words is incredible and you have conveyed a lovely message here. Everything ...