User avatar

Emmzziee

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Should've Been a Star

    This is great! :D And I know what this kind of thing feels like... like, you constantly feel useless; because you aren't famous, so nobody can ever be proud of ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Dog and Me

    This is cute :) The end part kind of reminds me of that advert, "My cat loves whiskers, and I love my cat!" And it's all put together really nicely, ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Unfortunate Sneeze

    Nice title ;) That was really cute! And fun too read. It's great, when I can read stories as easily as this one and still get entertained. Considering it wasn't ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Cold

    This is great :) And it's all true and appropriate, too. You don't go into great emotional detail about other "cold" things, whcih makes poems hard to read... You stuck ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Baby Doll

    Wow! This is amazingly spooky... Full of mystery. I don't 100% fully understand what the poem's supposed to be about, and yet it still feels kind of perfect. It's my ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Snow.

    I like this! I love snow, too... and I love poems that rhyme, and poems that use simple words like "lies" and make them sound beautiful, somehow... Your poem does ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emily is Lost

    This is easy to read, and I'm sure that it can relate to a lot of people too :) Lots of people have lost their best friends. Maybe... just maybe, ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trapped

    This is a really good poem! And it kind of related to me in a way... Well, I'm sure that it could relate to EVERYBODY; everyone feels trapped sometimes; as ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You're Perfect

    That was ... really good :) And kind of chilling too... I love poems that are written like this. And a total bonus is that I understood it, no doubt ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Random christmas story :)

    This is cute! :D and... you've totally inspired me to write something like this.. ;) xxxx

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: dream to reality (diary)

    Awrhhh I love this... it's awesomeness xD You use descriptive words and link them together so that it all runs smoothly and makes it easy to read :) I like ...

    Dec 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Smell The Rose

    I love this, it really is beautiful; how you've written this! Like, how everything is a mystery? And even a beautiful rose can be powerful enough to enfuse you, and ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You left her

    I love those really rare poems, where you can just picture one thing really strongly... And I totally did right here! So, you've got some good imagery skills. Keep writing, ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Nightmares.

    This is the kind of poetry that I totally LOVE! I honestly can't think of one bad thing to say... I love the way that this whole thing flows. And ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Math

    I love this! I guess it shows how life can get all mixed up and crazy. Everything merges together. That's the impression that I get, anyways :) xxx

    Dec 15, 2010


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle