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Emmzziee

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Should've Been a Star

    This is great! :D And I know what this kind of thing feels like... like, you constantly feel useless; because you aren't famous, so nobody can ever be proud of ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Dog and Me

    This is cute :) The end part kind of reminds me of that advert, "My cat loves whiskers, and I love my cat!" And it's all put together really nicely, ...

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Unfortunate Sneeze

    Nice title ;) That was really cute! And fun too read. It's great, when I can read stories as easily as this one and still get entertained. Considering it wasn't ...

    Dec 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Cold

    This is great :) And it's all true and appropriate, too. You don't go into great emotional detail about other "cold" things, whcih makes poems hard to read... You stuck ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Baby Doll

    Wow! This is amazingly spooky... Full of mystery. I don't 100% fully understand what the poem's supposed to be about, and yet it still feels kind of perfect. It's my ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Snow.

    I like this! I love snow, too... and I love poems that rhyme, and poems that use simple words like "lies" and make them sound beautiful, somehow... Your poem does ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Emily is Lost

    This is easy to read, and I'm sure that it can relate to a lot of people too :) Lots of people have lost their best friends. Maybe... just maybe, ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trapped

    This is a really good poem! And it kind of related to me in a way... Well, I'm sure that it could relate to EVERYBODY; everyone feels trapped sometimes; as ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You're Perfect

    That was ... really good :) And kind of chilling too... I love poems that are written like this. And a total bonus is that I understood it, no doubt ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Random christmas story :)

    This is cute! :D and... you've totally inspired me to write something like this.. ;) xxxx

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: dream to reality (diary)

    Awrhhh I love this... it's awesomeness xD You use descriptive words and link them together so that it all runs smoothly and makes it easy to read :) I like ...

    Dec 18, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Smell The Rose

    I love this, it really is beautiful; how you've written this! Like, how everything is a mystery? And even a beautiful rose can be powerful enough to enfuse you, and ...

    Dec 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: You left her

    I love those really rare poems, where you can just picture one thing really strongly... And I totally did right here! So, you've got some good imagery skills. Keep writing, ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Nightmares.

    This is the kind of poetry that I totally LOVE! I honestly can't think of one bad thing to say... I love the way that this whole thing flows. And ...

    Dec 15, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Math

    I love this! I guess it shows how life can get all mixed up and crazy. Everything merges together. That's the impression that I get, anyways :) xxx

    Dec 15, 2010


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