Emivanz1

This is SUCH a funny piece! I feel like a lot of works on YWS are there to explain hard things, or troubles going on in the world, so this ...

Wow this is such an amazing song! The power in this song shows that you have real genuine feelings for the story behind it. The song is really well written ...

Hi!! this is an amazing poem that pulls on your heartstrings. Your poem wonderfully describes how a person feels from an outside perspective. Some suggestions/questions I have... Who is the ...

This story was great!! and i hope we can see more in the future! the way you described Valerie's world was amazing. The i could really see, and smell the ...

Oh wow. Just wow. I have no words for this. this is beautiful and sad at the same time. its sadiful. your writing really puts you in the place of ...

this is an incredible song and just me with my horrible voice can tell it is MUCH better than some of the songs out there (looking at you baby shark) ...

This is a very intriguing story that has an awesome plot. It was a little confusing at times but altogether amazing. the inner voice/ thoughts were worded really well. I ...

oh wow this was incredible and totally relatable. I feel like we all had at least one "imaginary friend" growing up. This explains in perfect detail how a child feels ...

Hi this is an amazing story that really gets the attention of the reader. It is a great realization of what humanity will do to the world. The only thing ...

I love the way your character is expressing themself. They are telling the way they feel and it does not seem at all pushy. i lover how they are saying ...

Wow this is an amazing poem. I love the way you worded it, i personally love the part about "playing me like a violin." This is showing that your subject ...

This poem is amazing. I live in a place where winter is not that prominent of a season and I don't really get to experience the beauty of it. I ...