EmilyLemke

My answer is YES! This poem couldn't be said any better. Honestly. It makes you think and wonder about everything, which is what I do on occasion. There is so ...

Hello 567ajt! Although I can't really critic you on the whole work itself (because I don't have a tune and/or instruments to help me along.) The words, however, are really ...

Hello BloodinkSeesFootage! I love how you organized the essay. It was almost like I could see a reporter doing this on TV. I hate to say I do not know ...

Hello Niraco! First, you're poetry work is amazing. And the fact that this is only your second try at it is nearly mind-blowing! This is an amazing talent that you ...

Hello Kanome! I can honestly relate to the message that you are providing to the reader. I know what it feels like to walk around and everyone sees you one ...

Hello Aley! My mind has officially been blown out of my head. I love how you worked this poem and it feels as if you have managed to trap the ...

Hello there geekgirl! I thought that you did really well writing this poem. I like the part at the end that says: "Merry Christmas to all, try not to die" ...

Hello Rachel! First off, WOW JUST WOW!!!! This is incredible. My heart feels as if it has shattered also. This poem is so meaningful that it gave me the shivers ...

Hello Goldflame! I am absolutely obsessed with this poem right now! Almost as obsessed as I am with The Lord of The Rings and the Hobbit and just Middle Earth ...

Hello Kanome, I love your story and the message that it holds within itself. However, it was hard to hold my attention because it was very confusing. Not the words, ...

Hello MysteryMe, I truly believe that you have a talent in this field and you can go far with something like this. I like the words you use, they're simple, ...

Hello, Wow. I love what you managed to do with it. First, I love that song so much, and tear up and sometimes cry while I listen to it. So, ...