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Re: Dream at Peace
Hello :) These lyrics are really great. They are very interesting, I really wish I could hear them being sung :) From what I can tell it seems like the ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Souls Not Meant
Hi there :) I thought this was absolutely wonderful:) You're rhyming was great it felt very natural. The flow of the poem is very nice. And I like that you ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: A Note For a Date
Hi there :) This is the sweetest thing I have read :) It was so cute, and left me with a big smile on my face :) I think your ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Gravity (Prologue)
Hey :D This was fantastic. I really could not find anything I didn't like about this piece. I loved the beginning, it was so beautifully written, I had to keep ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: When the Stars Went Out (Part 2)
Hello :) This is such a nice story, I wish there was more :) Like Part 1, I think the writng is excellent, you are very good at drawing the ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: When the Stars Went Out (Part 1)
Hi there :) This is so great. I think you have come up with a very interesting plot. I really want to know what is happening to the stars! And ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The Golden Guitar Pick
Hi :D This was amazing :D This was a very enjoyable read. You are so good at description. Every sentence is beautiful and really draws the reader in. You really ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: The Mist
Hi there :D Wow. This was really good. I really enjoyed reading it, it was very interesting :) I was so impressed by the second paragraph, describing the confidence like ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: alone on a summer night
Hi there :D This is a truly beautiful poem. I love this poem because it is so relatable, like the other reviewers said, it really hits home with a lot ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: Bleeding Seconds
Hi there :) This is amazing. It is filled with beautiful imagery, the wording of the poem is great and has a lot of feeling to it. I can really ...
Jul 25, 2013 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter One)
Hello :) This is so good !!! I felt completely drawn into the story. It is beautifully written. I like the humorous parts, very funny, but everything thing else is ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Drowning
Hello! :D Wow, I think this poem is great! Every sentence was beautifully written, and it is very relatable. :D The poem just flows very nicely, and the form makes ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Silly Bee
Hi there:) I really like this poem, it's a really good idea you have come up with :) The flow is nice, and even though the rhyming is not consistent, ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Brain Tumor
Hi :) Very touching poem, I liked it a lot. I'm sorry about the man in your church, I hope he will get well. But you wrote a very nice ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: Nightmare
Hi! :) I thougth this was a nice start to something that could be great, it was a little over the place though. It could use some punctuation, but did ...
Jul 18, 2013
