Emerson

Well, of course this poem reminded me of All Quiet on the Western Front except there is no bird singing in the death scene... You used some great imagery in ...

Hello there! I cannot offer my full review at this moment because I shall be leaving for school, so I'll just comment on the things I noticed in one read ...

Hey there and welcome to The YWS! If you have any questions about the site feel free to bother me. You have a nice set up for a poem; a ...

The Scarlet Letter by Hawthorne is suburb, My Antonia by Willa Cather is one of my favorite books, and will give you a view of "frontier life" in Nebraska. Ethon ...

Hey there! I'd say the biggest problem I have with your poem is that your subject is a little strange and you kind of go in a weird direction. I ...

What once was, now is not. A heart left bleeding[s], bleeding,[/s] to rot. I can't say I hate this. It makes me think of the Imagists movement with Ezra Pound ...

Hey there! Here to deliver my review as promised. The biggest issue in this poem, I found, is that you're talking to someone and about something that I, the reader, ...

Hullo, hullo, hullo! The hall was decorated extravagantly. Its ivory walls were spotted with banal paintings of faces and wildflowers, velvet streamers hung from the ceiling, and all around shelves ...

Hey there, and welcome to YWS! Just something you might want to consider: posting something this long will make it harder for you to get reviews. Perhaps if you break ...

Hello! “No, but thank you,” he smiles. Since you can't smile words out of your mouth, that's not a dialogue tag. I twist my ring around on my finger [s]nervously[/s] ...

Hullo, hullo, hullo! I'm not sure what anyone else has said, so hopefully I don't go repeating others foolishly. You obviously have something emotional you're writing about, which is a ...

Hello! So, if I am understanding things rightly, this is about someone and his writing? I'm not sure I understand it correctly at all, so if this review seems to ...

Hello! First I'd like to let you know I removed your name from the end of the poem. I wasn't certain that was your actual name, but of well. If ...

Hey there! I wanted to let you know I modified your post to remove so many ````` marks. If you make your page break too long, it stretches out the ...

Hehe, I can only echo Pen on the punctuation front. I would say it isn't always necessary, but here it makes it a bit muddled to read without the punctuation ...