Emerson

*gasp* I knew Ariel was being sneaky! And that phone number.... weird . I love the media integration! Still haven't watched the video (I have to download quick time...) Watched ...

uuuugh.....!!!! I have to know what the heck is going on! The video was beyond creepy, and I tried to pause it on the blue thing you pass by to ...

I love how the ending line went well with the previously mentioned comment but...how in the hell could he have sex with Ariel? It's like he can't control his own ...

I am not entirely sure what to say on this poem. It isn't bad, but it is lacking anything to make it good as well. This wasn't some terrible, horrid ...

I didn’t understand how love could keep someone so alive when all my life it only seemed to threaten to crush every ounce of determination and resolve I had. In ...

*screams* You so bend what is real and what isn't, reality and fiction. You did with Ch too, and I love it. Like watching your best friend shot in the ...

The Others? Jon, this isn’t LOST. ha haha oh goodness...that reminds me of our conversations. Beautiful!!! *gasprifigous* OMFG BRAD! *dies of excitement* ehhh this is too much! I'm so confused ...

The kids jumped out in the same whirlwind of excitement and brazen sadness they fell with into the cab. the wording screwed me up, but this is more of a ...

(WARNING: I'm really tired so...this might be bad >_

I really enjoyed this. The atmosphere reminded me of a modern Vile Bodies and I loved the idea of a club scene as morning is coming. It had a good ...

I'm not exactly sure how to start off this critique, so I'll just make a list of what I found to be wrong with it. 1. Topic: The topic was ...

I don't want to say too much: I might get mean. The rhyming was bleh, because it happened so often and without an actual structure. The ending made me feel ...

the whole repetition of "magic eight ball" got annoying, though I have to admit the last stanza was at least cute. I have a couple problems with the poem, though. ...

The repetition of the lines "Our lives are like/old black and white movies." was unbearable and unneeded. The idea presented: that life is stagnant and nothing new happens. Okay, but ...

I adore these scenes. And this chapter is the most shocking of them. That voice that spoke now speaks to us, and mentions Jon, and--Aliens? I don't know what to ...