Emerson

Hello and welcome to your review! A long howl sets the steel mastodont in motion, its wheels gradually increasing speed while carrying it forward. Thick smoke goes up the chimney ...

Hi there! This is an amazing idea for a story and I think you could do some awesome things with it! Is there more you have to post? Right now ...

I think my favorite part of this poem was the language in the first and second stanza - it feels very mechanical and jerky in places, makes me imagine being ...

Well the words you got are all pretty good except hebrides :) I have to look that one up! I think the first thing I would advise for this point ...

There was dust over every surface in the house, a stack of pizza boxes and Chinese take-out containers, and the floor would turn the soles of your feet black. I ...

I find this to be an interesting piece. The combination of sun/rose/moon and the obvious references to sex and naughty bits - it's a good mixture and I like it. ...

A boy, skin darkened by work but still small and lithe enough to be a soldier’s serving boy, rests; lounging on the small mattress set at the side of the ...

Jeremy shivered as he cautiously set his cold feet on the marble floor, a series of light bulbs dangling on cords over the railroad tracks. My first thought is: is ...

Hi there and welcome to your review! Where Were you ever awoken by a strange and quick sound that made you fearful to turn around? Perhaps its voice is what ...

Hidden in the cupboard under the stairs, the gun shots echoed through the quieting house as a family of seven dropped to the ground, dead. This sentence is really disorienting ...

Hey there! I really like the title of this poem. And I like the rhyme scheme you have. But I think it does injustice to the poem itself. It feels ...

I enjoyed this a lot :-D Very playful and informative. There is a few places where you have typos, ex: the definitions have no spaces in them. Here is another ...

Hello and Welcome to your review! as the tran gets closer Typo here. This is an interesting poem and I love the imagery it has, it's extremely terrifying and beautiful. ...

Hello HomelessPorcupine and welcome to my review. The first thing I want to pick at: I am vulnerable. The Automaton is dead the human has come, emerged from the cocoon ...

Hey! (Haha) I read this a few times to try and get my grip around it to give my best opinion. It's not particularly bad but I'm not sure it's ...