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  • Lolita

    I finished this book about a month ago. It has raced to the top of my list, I fell in love with it. Nabokov did such an amazing job with ...

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  • Toujours Nuit~1400 words

    So as you can see, I've already gotten a lot of edits on it (see posts below!) but, I haven't the time to edit with school and NaNoWriMo coming so ...

    8 min read
  • Crime And Punishment

    I just finished the book today, it took me nearly a month to read! But it was well worth it. It was rough, the plot goes slowly through the whole ...

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  • To Keep No Secrets (Chapter Six added)

    All critiques welcomed! Though, WARNING: Since this is my first draft, I'm taking a bit of a NaNoWriMo mind set to it. So, all critiques are welcomed, but keep that ...

    7 min read
  • Child

    I know of Cantos, but is there any word for smaller devisions like these? I figured the second was too unlike the first for them to be the same thing. ...

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  • Language books?

    Some of you may know, I speak French well, I was going through this very old and beaten copy I have of "Read, Write, and Speak French" and its amazing, ...

    1 min read
  • Anxiety

    A note on the subject. I've recently found out that I probably have General Anxiety Disorder, and hyperactivity. This poem is an embodiment of my feelings and thoughts. It's not ...

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  • Act of Love

    Another creepy poem by me. Again, it starts out short. I'm not sure I can do any more to it, like I could with Child. But if someone asks.... I'll ...

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  • Silhouette

    This is my entry for the Fool's Duel. It is...Very morbid. But I like it. Shred it, just as Sebastian did! (You'll get that comment later....) ---- Dear Whoever,I am ...

    4 min read
  • Nameless Lover

    I hardly think this is the best poem I've written, in fact I wouldn't be hurt if some said it was the worst. I might also have been navel gazing. ...

    2 min read
  • Wilde Love: The Trials of Oscar Wilde

    This was my research paper for senior high (I'm only in 11th, mind you all.) and I thought I'd put it up to share the knowledge! Seeing as I've already ...

    9 min read
  • Sitting/Beauty

    My try at poetry in the cinquain form. The two are separate, but I figured I'd put them in the same thread since they were of the same style. The ...

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  • Romantic Fiction Writing Tips

    I thought it would be helpful to have a list of links that have to do with Romance writing, so I compiled some articles from around the site and from ...

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  • My Hair

    Hair press: out the door. Let its metal plates decay. I’m getting dreadlocks. ---- I call it a hair press, but it is also known as a flat iron, or ...

    1 min read
  • A Tight Grip: Fool's Duel

    A Tight Grip “You can’t run.” His voice was smooth as it escaped from his lips. “You can’t even move. I’m letting you breathe. If you want, I can stop ...

    3 min read
  • To Pass From Your Lips

    Took my breath away, Brad! It had a very nice flow to it, and the voice you used fit right in with the setting of the poem. I could feel ...

    1 min read
  • Deep in Mud (Revised Version)

    All comments/critiques are welcome! --- Deep in Mud Stone by stone I wall you in. I'll always be with you.Stone by stone I wall you in,And nobody will hear you ...

    13 min read
  • A Moment of Healing

    So, it's more free verse than I normally am. I'm not sure that the line it ends on works - Dream_deep suggested I lengthen it, so the whole lost stanza ...

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  • Character Sketch for Lit. Class

    I finally finished this! Of course, I'm writing in on the last day I have >.< I'm real smart. If I could have a few proof readers or someone else ...

    4 min read
  • The Dangers of Losing Yourself to Love

    EDIT: I already turned this in, so proof reading isn't necessary (though I know you'll have the urge to correct me here or there!) but if you are truly bored ...

    9 min read
  • Something Exciting that Happens to Be Untitled

    I'm eating toast. Toast Which is why I boast about cooking roast. And I love toast the most because it is a host A host that is lost cause. 'Cause. ...

    1 min read
  • asphyxiation

    With her heart in her mouth, she spoke. Words lined up in her throat like teenagers eager to jump off a bridge. Her tongue flicked and flied, the perfect spring ...

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  • The Midnight Disease (about writers block)

    The Midnight Disease: The Drive to Writer, Writers Block, and the Creative Brain by Alice W. Flaherty was a joy to read. Maybe I'm just a big language nerd, but ...

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  • Atonement by Ian McEwan

    Back cover reads: On a summer day in 1935, young Briony Tallis witnesses a moment's flirtation between her older sister, Cacilia, and Robbie Turner, the son of a servant. But ...

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  • Chance of Snow 1

    It took me two years to become a postman. To pass the test I had to carry a seventy pound bag of mail and when I first picked it up ...

    14 min read
  • Chance of Snow 2

    If you hated part one, you'll only hate part two! Don't torture yourself. Also, I highly suggest you read part one before reading this, or it will make no sense ...

    18 min read
  • God Still Loves You (1)

    For Cal's romance contest. I'm not entirely sure I trust myself in the first person. Oh, and the underlined words are the prompts used. 041. The Apple of my Eye ...

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  • God Still Loves You (2)

    010. Dirty, Sloppy Hearts That afternoon, we walked together to Nina’s house. As I walked up the stairs, the wood creaked, whispering to me about how long it had been ...

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  • God Still Loves You (3)

    012. Her Great Flood Tuesday. Nina had youth group. At lunch, I hid my face in my hair. I had never seen her in the cafeteria, but maybe she was ...

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  • God Still Loves You (4)

    019. All Stairs Lead To Hell I would tell Nina how I felt when I ate the last cookie. I promised it to myself. I promised myself my own death. ...

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  • God Still Loves You (5)

    (This isn't as good as I wish it was, but I'm going on vacation Monday, and I didn't want to leave my "fans" without an ending. Please keep in mind, ...

    12 min read
  • Keeping Time
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  • Jamais Quitter [1]

    [Note on Title I feel bad for having my title in French, but to me, it is perfect. So here is the translators note: jamais quitter means "never to leave", ...

    7 min read
  • Jamais Quitter [2]

    A florescent light flickered a few times, grew dim, then started buzzing. The monotonous drone itched in Aline’s ears. It reminded her of the few times bugs had flown into ...

    8 min read
  • Jamais Quitter [3]

    Aline had slit her wrists on Friday. The doctors were releasing her today. In all, she had spent three nights in the hospital, meaning that today was Monday. As soon ...

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  • Jamais Quitter [4] (ending modified)

    [A/N: I just wanted to say thank you to everyone who has been reading and reviewing this for me! Even if you're just reading this sans review, I still love ...

    12 min read
  • Gossip on the Church Steps

    Mr. and Mrs. Belmer lived in a small house on the outskirts of our town for over thirty years and no one had seen them come out of the house ...

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  • With Much Regret, I Do

    A/N: This poem is kind of old. Like, a year + old. But it's been well edited and I read over it again to make sure it was still worthy ...

    2 min read
  • Love's Introspection

    I haven't written poetry in a long time, but this came to me last night. I feel like I could have a better ending, so rather than obsessing I thought ...

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  • A Journey Through the Binary

    16+ for the F word. This is a personal poem for me, but I hope others enjoy it as well. I keep changing the title while talking to people about ...

    2 min read


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart