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Wow, allot of grammar mistakes xD I'm hoping the next chapter isn't this bad :P

I'm planning on doing what you said, I've had another review talking about that so i'm most definately going to do that :P Thanks for the advice! :D

Thanks for the tips! And the audio logs you'd understand more if your read the first chapter , the WHOLE story is basically a bunch of files. And yes, I ...

I KEEP ACCIDENTALLY POSTING MY REVIEW TWICE!

Accidentally submitted my review again, oops...

Oh its coming my friend, :P

Thanks for the tips! I'll make sure that the next chapter will be better grammar wise than this one :D

Thanks for the tips and feedback! And don't worry, I wont stop writing anytime soon, :P

Its just, its bootyful, ITS BOOTYFUL 10/10 IGN, 5 STARS, 5 STARS, FOLLOW FOLLOW FOLLOW! I don't know if you can tell but i'm being something called SAR-CAS-TIC ;)

Oh, my bad... lol

Hey im reviewing my self ya- No not really, I aint not coin farmer... :P

I can compare to this. I feel lonely allot. I love the ways and agree on how you describe loneliness. I find this to be amazing and I think its ...

Thank you for the feedback! I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it! :D

Thanks, I'll try to fix the things you mentioned soon, kind of busy right now with school, lol. But thanks for the feedback! :D

Yeah, Next chapter is going to make more sense, or maybe I'll just edit this one first... Yeah, that's what i'm gonna do.