EmeraldEyes

Hi I have to say, I really recognise the wording you have here as if it were part of some sort of song I hae previously heard: 'I changed, My ...

Hi This was very short 'Matter, Woods, Trees, Leafs All For Us To See But Only Notice All You See Dark, Grey, Black, Concrete. (read bottom to top in backwards)' ...

Hi I don't understand if this is a script or if it's a novel chapter or what? It is a clearly a dialogue and you are very keen on your ...

Hi. This is a weird work. Te idea that it would be written by a polar bear is it> Well hat is ver odd indeed. I apologise for all these ...

Hi When I look at this, i's like looking at a big poem. Like instead of stanzas ou have large paragraphs. I am no sure if that was the intention, ...

Hi You go me hooked, this was interesting, also the work was not what I expected of it if that makes sense. It was weirkdly informative in a dreamlike sense. ...

This is a simple title for a simple work. For the purposes of my review, I have ran the sentences together. 'She was so sad she ceased to even exist. ...

I love excerpts! If you want this to be as dramatic as possible, there are several things you can do to enhance the drama First of all, open in a ...

Hello The shortness of this work is part of its charm. Upon reading, it is difficult for the reader to decide, what exactly the ‘doubt’ in your title refers to. ...

Aww. This is very romantic and perfect in time for Valentine's Day. In terms of literary merit, it is very well written. Here for example: 'No, imagining my hands around ...

Hello. Well this has a very miserable ending to doesn't iT! Unlike your other work I mus say, but i makes sense given where your inspiaion came from. (please excuse ...

I had never heard of the work this was based on, so I am judgin i independently. 'I told her that I knew what it felt like, to be a ...

Hello This reads somewhat like a script, you are severely lacking description. Having said that, the content is good and entertaining. :) Just, as with this: '"Oh... hey Violet". He ...

I am thinking about it. :D And I am thinking you have a great idea, with heavy self loathing overtones???? 'I am human and I never quite realized what a ...

'Cause she knows that when she has nothin left to light, she can't inhale, and if she can't inhale, she can't blow herself higher. ' Hello. I've chosen this as ...