ElvenJedi

Thanks for this awesome review!

Thanks for this review! Very very VERY helpful! I write a lot of poetry so that's probably how that purple-y stuff got in there... I'll try to keep that out ...

Thanks so much for this encouraging review! Nice to see someone who has played ARK as well. And of course, thank you for your suggestions, very helpful. Thanks for the ...

Nice work! I really liked this keep writing!

sorry if the review was a little long; it's my way of showing that I was genuinely interested and captivated by this poem :P

Personal preference I see! Great job again--wonderful work of art!

I LOVE THIS! It's so original and amazing it sent shivers down my spine. You definitely have a talent for writing poetry!

Thanks for this helpful review! And as for capitalizing "Heaven" I think it's just personal preference. If you capitalize other real places like Earth and Saturn, I think Heaven deserves ...

Thanks so much this was very helpful! I'll definitely consider your suggestions if I edit this and when I write more poetry. And I'm glad someone got the meaning behind ...

Glad I helped! And you should edit this; it has potential to be something awesome!

Thanks so much for another review! Very encouraging and helpful =]

Thanks for the review! I appreciate the encouragement and suggestions. =D

Oooh nice! What kinda music?

LOL I was wondering how many you got haha :'D do you like listen to music... all day or something? O_o

Thanks so much for the encouraging review! And I agree with you about it being the style. Thanks!