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Re: Nature's Enemy
Hey there, friend! First of all, I really liked the formatting of the first two stanzas and how you used the double 'and' at the end. Right from the start, ...
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Re: Happy.
Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. The first thing that stood out to me was how you asked so many questions. This made it easy for me to relate ...
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Re: The creeping, crawling feeling of love
Best mate. “Best mate”. All he ever would be. That was all Edwin ever was to him. It shouldn’t have shocked him, he knew Charles for decades, yet it didn’t ...
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Re: What Is A Person?
Hello again, my friend!! I loved your last piece, so I decided to read this lovely poem of yours. Let's jump right into it! There are so many people. How ...
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Re: Am I Pretty When I Cry?
Hi, friend! I am not sure if this is your story or if it is fictional, but by the way it is written, I assume that it is yours. I ...
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Re: It won’t work out
Hello there, friend! This was a very short, short story, but I still enjoyed reading through it :) “I can tell you right now, this isn’t going to end well. ...
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Re: speaking of ink
Avi! This is such a wonderful poem
Feb 11, 2025 -
Re: Cleaning Hearts
Hi Que! First of all, I love how you follow the same rhyme scheme for the whole poem and also stay consistent with the same theme. The poem felt very ...
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Re: Jenny’s heart 🫀🔪
Hello!!! I am happy to be back to review another song of yours :D Jenny’s heart was torn apart But those love letters made it all the better She kept ...
Feb 11, 2025 -
Re: What if I never fell for you?
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this poem and I wanted to share a few thoughts :D I wish I did better. I wish I was the guy you like. I ...
Feb 10, 2025 -
Re: You Came to Me in a Dream
Hi, friend! :) The first thing that I noticed about your poem is how you use such elegant and beautiful language throughout the entire thing. This poem feels like a ...
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Re: something and therefore nothing
Hi Ant!! :D What a beautiful poem! The first thing that I noticed is that you write in a speaking way. What I mean by this is that the poem ...
Feb 8, 2025 -
Re: *****
Raven, hello!! I love this poem so much! Right from the start, I found it to be really relatable. To me, it seems like you were talking about someone who ...
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Re: little dizzies
Gengar, hi!! This was SO cool. Right away, I was intrigued by the visual aspect of the poem. I think it's really cool how you distorted the text in no ...
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Re: where the branch hit my neck
Hi Chem!! Ellie here for a review :) First impressions: as I read your poem, I was really blown away at how wonderfully you crafted this unique voice that was ...
Feb 3, 2025
