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EllieMae

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Nature's Enemy

    Hey there, friend! First of all, I really liked the formatting of the first two stanzas and how you used the double 'and' at the end. Right from the start, ...

    Feb 26, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Happy.

    Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. The first thing that stood out to me was how you asked so many questions. This made it easy for me to relate ...

    Feb 17, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: The creeping, crawling feeling of love

    Best mate. “Best mate”. All he ever would be. That was all Edwin ever was to him. It shouldn’t have shocked him, he knew Charles for decades, yet it didn’t ...

    Feb 14, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What Is A Person?

    Hello again, my friend!! I loved your last piece, so I decided to read this lovely poem of yours. Let's jump right into it! There are so many people. How ...

    Feb 14, 2025
  • Other » General, General Re: Am I Pretty When I Cry?

    Hi, friend! I am not sure if this is your story or if it is fictional, but by the way it is written, I assume that it is yours. I ...

    Feb 14, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: It won’t work out

    Hello there, friend! This was a very short, short story, but I still enjoyed reading through it :) “I can tell you right now, this isn’t going to end well. ...

    Feb 12, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: speaking of ink

    Avi! This is such a wonderful poem

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cleaning Hearts

    Hi Que! First of all, I love how you follow the same rhyme scheme for the whole poem and also stay consistent with the same theme. The poem felt very ...

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Lyrics » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Jenny’s heart 🫀🔪

    Hello!!! I am happy to be back to review another song of yours :D Jenny’s heart was torn apart But those love letters made it all the better She kept ...

    Feb 11, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: What if I never fell for you?

    Hi! I really enjoyed reading this poem and I wanted to share a few thoughts :D I wish I did better. I wish I was the guy you like. I ...

    Feb 10, 2025
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: You Came to Me in a Dream

    Hi, friend! :) The first thing that I noticed about your poem is how you use such elegant and beautiful language throughout the entire thing. This poem feels like a ...

    Feb 9, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: something and therefore nothing

    Hi Ant!! :D What a beautiful poem! The first thing that I noticed is that you write in a speaking way. What I mean by this is that the poem ...

    Feb 8, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: *****

    Raven, hello!! I love this poem so much! Right from the start, I found it to be really relatable. To me, it seems like you were talking about someone who ...

    Feb 6, 2025
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: little dizzies

    Gengar, hi!! This was SO cool. Right away, I was intrigued by the visual aspect of the poem. I think it's really cool how you distorted the text in no ...

    Feb 4, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: where the branch hit my neck

    Hi Chem!! Ellie here for a review :) First impressions: as I read your poem, I was really blown away at how wonderfully you crafted this unique voice that was ...

    Feb 3, 2025


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