Elizabeth

Oh my goodness this was great for somebody who hasn't written as long as most people... it had violence and a plot! Plots are very hard to find when I ...

Honestly I have to say what Crysi says... I mean I could recite this with no flaws after having read it 3 times because I was looking for errors... But ...

Tsk tsk tsk, I don't want to be the motherly type but CLEAN YOUR ROOM!! Ok for the poem... I kinda felt that the thing was totally choppy and as ...

""All three of us groaned as we recognized the voice of Will Dobbins, the most annoying person on the face of the Earth… possibly in the history of the universe. ...

This was amazing. It was so beautiful too, and it's about your brother. I won't ask any questions... It will lead me to many more assumtions as to everything... This ...

I really enjoyed this :) But somehow it appeared like something Shakesphere or one of those great old dead butt dust men wrote... Was your inspiration based upon that? Once ...

HAHAHAHAHAHA that was so fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuunny. Ok, that isn't a word but still....... what is SS? I liked it, even though the format was that of a blind llamas... :P

And I shall never feel the burden of each hit they is slowly getting me down onto my knees and making me beg for mercy. I liked this line alot ...

I'm not one to Edit uncontrolably but.... Drop after drop flash after flash the light and sound start to clash it went so fast I could not gasp a breath ...

Well I could see whaere you weretrying to go with this... but it's midnight here, let's see my focus skills... It was good, although I somehow felt like you were ...

Frankly as soon as you said it was loud or soft I could easily picture the yin and yang of the enitre thing. Bland in my opinion. Of course I ...

Yay Colton, you posted it! I honestly like it, i had a lot of fun writing and re-writing and editing and re-editing it over and over again... I think i'll ...

KAitlyn your dad is so amazing (taught me how to use a drill :twisted:) This was a very sweet poem to him and if you ask Shadow Knight he'll probably ...

Oh yeah... the highest rating was on that song... but that wasn't even fll credit. I was pretty pissed off at it... yeah, but you weren't nessisarily talking about the ...

OK, this is talent that I never knew you had because you never took time to SHOW ME KAITLYN!!! This was so amazing and it made me scared... I haven't ...