Yeah, I know I wasn't supposed to read this one. Teehee.
I hate the title. 1) You only get one first kiss. Sorry I don't have a word for "first kiss with a particular person". 2) A title, by its nature, should leave a thought dangling. Ellipsis points (...) are just irksome at this stage.
[quote] The first one was different
But this one was grand
Eyes closed
Lips parted
Tongues twisted
Souls joined [/quote]
Somehow I really doubt the first kiss was any different. That all comes with the territory. I agree with Carmina- the event doesn't matter so much as the feeling.
Still, a promising starting point. Good luck.
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