It wasn't so much the repition that bothered me in this poem, it was just how personal it was. Honestly, I think this belongs in the Lyric Poetry section and I could move it if you wanted me to. However, too me it was just like "It's all about me, me, me. Me and my thoughs. Me and my problems."
Try to change it from another view like using "You." You could even mix it up using "We" or something. Try to break up some of the humdrumness.
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