Elinor

Hi! This sort of seems like it was run through a translator; it was very rough and sort of unfocused! I think it needs too be a lot longer so ...

Hi! :lol: Oh my god, this was hilarious! I think you did a perfect job of satirizing Mary Sues and Gary Stus, because they're basically what you've described and very ...

Hi! So, I liked what you were trying to do with this poem. It was a wholly original idea! It's tough to write from the viewpoint of a animal! However, ...

Hi! Okay, so I liked what you were trying to do with this poem. At first I thought it was a bit cliché, but after a second read through I ...

Hi, Cof! So, I'm not really sure if I liked this or not. It was really cool what you were trying to do, and some of your imagery was nice, ...

Hi! Kyosuke...this was amazing. It was seriously what I needed to pick up my day. Your imagery is surreal and brilliant, and I can really feel like I'm there, ash ...

Hi Kammie! So, I really liked this. It was compelling, and I liked the cross between fantasy and historical fiction that this piece seemed to have. Your characters were wonderful, ...

Hi Kyllorac! I'll say I rather liked this. I usually yell at people when they don't have punctuation or grammar purposefully, but you did it purposefully, and well. The lack ...

Hi! This felt like it was a little unfocused. In seven stanzas, I can't tell why you wanted to write this, or why the neon sign is synonymous with love, ...

Before I begin, I just had a quick note. If you're doing an acrostic poem and your word is actually more then one word, there should be spaces between them. ...

Err...no. Sorry, but I can't really say that I liked this story. It was uninteresting because there was no conflict to it. It was just about a girl who started ...

Hi Ari! So, It's good to see you posting poetry again! I always thought that you had fair talent. When you first joined, you had amazing poetry that gave off ...

Expanding on what Forestqueen said, before you write poetry, you should read it and study it so you know to write it properly. The same can be said for any ...

Hi Sea! This has a fresh concept and lovely imagery, but it just didn't seem like a poem at all. If you take out the stanzas, you've got a basic ...

Err... Three things. First, have you ever read or seen poetry? They have to be divided into stanzas and lines. Maybe the lines might be whole sentences or bits of ...