Elinor

Hi! So, I really liked this poem. I wasn't familiar with Elizabeth Báthory, so I read her Wikipedia profile, and I'll say that you definitely captured her life well! Your ...

Hi! This is pretty good, but I had one little problem with it, and that lies with your imagery! It's very tell-y. For instance, you mention that the place is ...

Hi! Do you have a webcam, or even just a video camera? Tape yourself singing it, and then upload it to YouTube! Then you can post it along with your ...

Hi! Okay, so I admit that I really liked this poem. Your rhythm and rhyme scheme were both good, and your simple word choice and imagery told exactly what they ...

Hi! So, this was okay. I appreciate what you're trying to do by making us aware but drugs and all of that, but there wasn't anything particularly memorable in this ...

Hi! Okay, so first I really think that this should be moved to fan-fiction short stories, considering that you're writing your own story about characters that have already been established. ...

Hi! To be honest with you, I didn't enjoy the piece. You have to be real careful for silly grammatical errors-one proofread and you could caught a good chunk of ...

Okay, Hi Forest! I thought I'd drop by and give you a review, especially since I feel somewhat bad about not letting you in my storybook. So, having not heard ...

Hi! Okay, so, whenever you're trying a new form of art, it's best to understand basic formatting to what you're writing. Just by looking this I can tell you've never ...

Hi! So, I liked this. Within such a short amount of time, you capture the setting and the characters really well. However, I think that this could be a little ...

Hi Teddy! So, this was cute. I like how your narrator is all scared and that, and your simple, flat imagery I adored. However, I think I wanted to like ...

Hi! So, I'm not quite sure why you posted this if it's a few years old. Do you want to recycle the idea? Are you just comparing what you wrote ...

Hi! Sorry that this is going to be a short review, but there was only one minor thing that irked me. Okay, so I'm not sure what to think about ...

Hi. No exclamation marks like usual, because I'm just not in the mood. I went back and re-read the last couple of scenes, and I just want to comment on ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! :elephant: To the poem! I rather liked it, but it seemed a bit unfocused, and I didn't really know what was going on. Well, I did ...