Elinor

Hi Mavery, The plot thickens! Please let me now when you post future parts to this, and I promise it won't take me as long as it did the first ...

Hi Mavery, I'm back to review your next part! This review will be a bit shorter than the previous two parts because a lot of the things that I touched ...

Hi Mavery! I really like where this story is heading, but I don't necessarily know that I like how it's being presented. Let me clarify what I mean. The idea ...

Hi maverymadams, My name is Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you've enjoyed your stay thus far. I think this short ...

Hey! So, I guess we'll have to wait to a little while longer to see how the prologue and this are connected, but I'm alright with that. If you post ...

Hello Emma, My name is Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I quite liked this, and I'm very interested in checking out the first chapter - which ...

Hi EverWinter, This is sweet. And based off what I've read, I'm interested to read more of this story and find out who these characters are. From your descriptions I ...

Hey Felistia, I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I think this piece has a lot of potential. Right now, It's a nice little short with good ...

Hello Liverwurst, My name is Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I quite liked this, actually. It was relatable, and even though it happened off the cuff ...

Well hello there! Welcome to YWS! You've certainly got a lot going on in this story. I felt like you took me on an emotional rollercoaster in the short space ...

Hi Chaser! This is really cute, and I see what you did there with the second line. ;) But yeah, like Artemis, I don't have too much to say about ...

Hi Rainbow! So far, I think you have a really good start with this. Did you have a tune already in mind or written for this? It certainly felt lyrical ...

Hi Sbeav! Welcome to YWS. I hope you've been having a good time on the site so far. My name is Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. ...

Hi Alison! There are a lot of stories about romance, a lot of stories about terminal illness, and a lot of stories about the death of young people. That's because ...

Hi Cherokee! Welcome to YWS! I hope you've been having a good time here so far. I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I was certainly intrigued, ...