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Re: Fox Who Stole Her Name 1.1
Hey Lauren! I realized before I read this that I don't think I've read any of your writing before, at least, I don't know If I've ever critiqued it on ...
Jun 2, 2018 -
Re: Poem Of Blue
Hey Sree! Happy review day! I'm Elinor, here to review your poem on behalf of the Red Rangers. Also, I notice you've been with us for a few days now, ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Strain
Hey Asterinous! Welcome to YWS and happy Review Day! I hope you're enjoying your time on the site so far. I'm here to review your short story on behalf of ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Tree Problem [1]
Hey Lareine! Happy review day! I'm here to review your short story on behalf of the Red Rangers. I quite like this. I think you have a really nice writing ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: July, 1941
Hey scribbleinks! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to review your story. The 1940s is one of my favorite eras of history. There were a lot of horrible things happening in ...
May 24, 2018 -
Re: Working with the Enemy
Hey Banana25! Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I wanted to stop by and give you a quick review on this short story. So far, I think the strongest thing ...
May 18, 2018 -
Re: this has happened to me,
Hey Casanova! Elinor here to give you a quick review. I enjoyed this poem, and thought its message was very powerfully conveyed in a very clean and tight way. I ...
May 18, 2018 -
Re: Don't you see?
Hey LadyOkra! I'm Elinor and I'm here to give you a review. So far I think you have a really good idea for a story and I really enjoyed reading ...
May 18, 2018 -
Re: The Zombie Game [part 1]
Hey Cat! I'm glad to see something you've posted here that I can review. So far, I think what you have is really strong, and I'm excited to see where ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: Next Summer
Hey Stella, Here to give you a review. Congrats on writing this piece, I really enjoyed it. The strongest part of it is definitely the imagery. It's quite vivid, and ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: fellow wanderer
Hey killeham! Elinor here to give you a quick review. I quite enjoyed this poem. It had a nice flow to it, and was calming to read, in a way. ...
May 9, 2018 -
Re: I'm right here
Hey Eve! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a quick review on your poem. I'm amazed that a draft of this was written in elementary school. I'm not ...
May 9, 2018 -
Re: Power
Hey Satrena! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review on your poem. I love acrostics. I used to write them all the time. I also like your ...
May 9, 2018 -
Re: hotels
Hey Craz! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I like hotels too. Like you mention, there's just something about them, about getting away from a place ...
May 6, 2018 -
Re: Grow Out - Pretending
Hey Slobst! Super glad to see another script writer around these parts. I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I'm assuming that this is the beginning of ...
May 6, 2018
