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Elinor

Elinor

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Fox Who Stole Her Name 1.1

    Hey Lauren! I realized before I read this that I don't think I've read any of your writing before, at least, I don't know If I've ever critiqued it on ...

    Jun 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Poem Of Blue

    Hey Sree! Happy review day! I'm Elinor, here to review your poem on behalf of the Red Rangers. Also, I notice you've been with us for a few days now, ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Strain

    Hey Asterinous! Welcome to YWS and happy Review Day! I hope you're enjoying your time on the site so far. I'm here to review your short story on behalf of ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Tree Problem [1]

    Hey Lareine! Happy review day! I'm here to review your short story on behalf of the Red Rangers. I quite like this. I think you have a really nice writing ...

    May 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Romantic Re: July, 1941

    Hey scribbleinks! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to review your story. The 1940s is one of my favorite eras of history. There were a lot of horrible things happening in ...

    May 24, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Working with the Enemy

    Hey Banana25! Welcome to YWS! I'm Elinor, and I wanted to stop by and give you a quick review on this short story. So far, I think the strongest thing ...

    May 18, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: this has happened to me,

    Hey Casanova! Elinor here to give you a quick review. I enjoyed this poem, and thought its message was very powerfully conveyed in a very clean and tight way. I ...

    May 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Don't you see?

    Hey LadyOkra! I'm Elinor and I'm here to give you a review. So far I think you have a really good idea for a story and I really enjoyed reading ...

    May 18, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Zombie Game [part 1]

    Hey Cat! I'm glad to see something you've posted here that I can review. So far, I think what you have is really strong, and I'm excited to see where ...

    May 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Next Summer

    Hey Stella, Here to give you a review. Congrats on writing this piece, I really enjoyed it. The strongest part of it is definitely the imagery. It's quite vivid, and ...

    May 16, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fellow wanderer

    Hey killeham! Elinor here to give you a quick review. I quite enjoyed this poem. It had a nice flow to it, and was calming to read, in a way. ...

    May 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: I'm right here

    Hey Eve! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a quick review on your poem. I'm amazed that a draft of this was written in elementary school. I'm not ...

    May 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Power

    Hey Satrena! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review on your poem. I love acrostics. I used to write them all the time. I also like your ...

    May 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: hotels

    Hey Craz! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I like hotels too. Like you mention, there's just something about them, about getting away from a place ...

    May 6, 2018
  • Script » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Grow Out - Pretending

    Hey Slobst! Super glad to see another script writer around these parts. I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give you a review. I'm assuming that this is the beginning of ...

    May 6, 2018


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