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Re: feeling lonely
Hey Mage! I saw this sitting in the Green Room and realized that I don't think I've ever critiqued any of your work before. Anyway, it's time for that to ...
May 31, 2019 -
Re: A little rambling
Hey Corvus! Elinor here to give you a quick review. I liked this poem and I thought it was a nice look at the creative process that put a smile ...
May 30, 2019 -
Re: Till Death do us Part
Hey Cake! Welcome to YWS! I see you've been here for a couple of weeks, and I hope you're enjoying it so far. My name is Elinor, and I thought ...
Nov 13, 2018 -
Re: Beating Me
Hi FireSpyGirl! I noticed you joined just about a month ago, and I hope you're enjoying it here so far. My name is Elinor, and because I need to review ...
Nov 12, 2018 -
Re: The Crew 1.1
Hey concord! I'm extremely late to the review month game, and I noticed this sitting in the green room. I don't think I've read your work before, and besides, I ...
Sep 28, 2018 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 1.2
Hey sound! I'm finally going to get caught up with your novel like I promised. I want to read more of your writing because I really enjoy your style. From ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: first kiss on the fourth of july: a list
Hi RoyalHigness! I'm Elinor, and I'm here to give your poem a quick review. I thought that this was beautifully written, and that your imagery was lovely. I thought you ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Hero for Hire: Chapter 1
Hey Sonder, Happy LMS! Hope your writing is going well. Here I am for my review, as promised. I loved this story, and I thought it was a great beginning. ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: More Than Dead - Chapter 1
Hey killeham! Happy LMS! Here for your review, as promised. I hope your writing is going well. I'm curious to see where you go with this, especially since this is ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 2: Layer 32
Hey Mea! Happy LMS! Here is your review, as promised. After reading through your first chapter and now this, what I like the most about your story so far is ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 1.1
HEY SOUND! Here for your review just like I promised! I really enjoyed this chapter, and I have very little to say about it. The first section of this chapter ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1
Hi Biscuits! Happy LMS, and congratulations on writing your first chapter! Stopping by to give my review, as promised! I thought your opening few paragraphs were great in giving us ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: think of you
Hey izanami! Last review. I thought you did a great job with this poem, and while reading it I could definitely tell that it came from your heart, because the ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: dark words: a sestina on mental disorders
Hey izanami! Just getting caught up on all of the reviews that I owe you. I hope you don't mind! I enjoyed reading your poem. I wanted to congratulate you ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Crystal Clear Chapter 1 (again)
Hi izanami! Sorry it's taken me a while to get to this, but here I am to review your first chapter! I quite like the tone that you're going for ...
Jul 1, 2018