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Hello Peanut! She is alive. In a state I cannot imagine but alive. ^ Hmm, I'm not quite so sure about this opening line. First off, it's written incorrectly. In ...

Heya Forestqueen. I've seen you around chat, but I don't think I've ever reviewed anything of yours, so here we go! ^^ Chapter 1 “Hey, Rachel.” I heard a voice ...

I only have two nitpicks and you can see the thunderheads across the valley, I'm not so sure about starting a sentence with 'and'. If you want to keep the ...

Hello there. I totally agree with anima said. However, he failed to mention that you do get one freebie, but you have posted three literary works and you have no ...

Hey Springs! Your poem is alright, but it definitely needs a lot of work. You wrote this two and a half years ago, so I'm not going to be too ...

Hey there God. Let's take a look at this, shall we? I found it to be quite good. I loved the plot, the mood and the feel, but I do ...

Hey there CreativeFreak! Let's take a look at your poem, shall we? ^.^ Math I see the numbers Stretching across the paper. ^ I love this line. However, I think ...

Hello, Brybry dear. Before I begin the review, I just want to make one comment. In a novel, there are two kinds of Intros, Prefaces and Prologues . Introductions should ...

Hello, LoVeLeSs! How do you do? Allow me to review this quite excellent poem. :-) fixed grammatical errors in green It will be dark , and It will be cold ...

Hello Wildfire. How do you do? Your poem is very short, but I don't think that matters, does it? It's the quality that counts. Now, let's get to the poem. ...

Hello, Darth Maul! Allow me to review your very excellent poem. I read it through and I absolutley loved it! The content was perfect, and it kept me hooked from ...

Hello, Alfreto! How do you do? Dear Mr. Somebody, ^ I'm only one sentence in, yet im confused. Who is Mr. Somebody, and why should I care? Who is he ...

Hello, Channon. How do you do? Preface- Pristine shoes clicked against he cold tiled floor. ^ This first sentence is very, very confusing. I don't know what your trying to ...

Hey Anima! How are you? I don't believe we've met before, but allow me to review your poem :) I am feeling dark. 'Dark' Dosen't seem like it would be ...

Your Prize Review 1/5 Hey Dakota. I really enjoyed this. Your Cinderella narrarator is very, very funny and easy to relate to. I didn't really see very many grammar mistakes, ...