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Hello Amy! This is a very awesome poem, and I was laughing the whole way. I do have a few nitpicks though. My comments are in italics. One time is ...

Hello there! I agree with Hawkie. This story was good, but it was way too preachy. The moral was incredibly obvious, and it seemed more like a lecture. God loves ...

Hello there Lily. Here is your review, as promised. Cassie had never trusted beautiful boys. ^ I don't like this sentence as a hook. It's kind of bland and it ...

Hello Emi. It's a pleasure to review another one of your poems. It's very short, but does that matter? It's the quality that counts. Sometimes the shortest pieces of work ...

Hello Emi. This is a very beautiful poem. However, I do want to mention one thing before I begin the review. Looking at your profile, it appears that your review ...

Hello there. This was quite a well written poem, and I could find nothing wrong with it except for grammar. Each stanza which you've written consists of four words and ...

Hello there. This was a good poem, and you were very poetic and had good word choice. However, it's title was very confusing. Your poem is about the sun and ...

Hello. This such a beautiful story. However, Before I begin my review, I would like to point out that you have this story posted two times. Once is enough; just ...

Hello Amber. This was indeed a very cute little poem, but I found that it lacked flow and poetic form, as it read more like a diary entry. You have ...

Hello there. Here is your review, as promised. Chapter 13 “Gary, say something , p lease!” Isabella stood up and looked at Gary’s trembling (trembling seems as though its a ...

xD Yes, she does suck pretty bad. And she plugs her ears and runs at the slightest critisim of her books, which I hate the most. She doesn't understand that ...

Hello! I read this story over a few times, because it's very well written. It reminded me a lot of Pride and Prejudice. “May I have this dance, Miss Kathryn?” ...

Hello Vox. Going into your story, I expected it to be terrible. Why? Well, your title wasn't exactly the snappiest one out there. I know you're supposed to judge a ...

Hey Ellie! I loved your poem, but I just have two problems with it. melted sunshine For some reason this just doesn't sit right with me. The sonud of it ...

Hello there! This poem was quite wonderful. It is close to perfect. You have true talent. However, I do have a few nitpicks. First, I don't really understand this simile. ...