ElinaVest

Thanks, i will keep in mind your suggestions. For myself there were some places i didn't like but at that point i couldn't put my finger on it.

Everyone has that little dark time in their life and after few corners comes back the light

Thanks, i know i need to lighten up my work but these not so happy poems comes to mo so very easy that it's hard for mo write something happy. ...

Thanks, it does help because i had a problem with that line, but i couldn't quite figure it out.

This is a quite a nice poem. It strongly says what you feel and what you want to happen but it shows the realistic side too. I think probably everyone ...

Thank you

it means a lot to me that there are people who appreciate what i write

thanks a lot

Thank you very much. Well grammar isn't my strong side in none of languages i know, so i am trying to work with that issue. Thanks and i will keep ...

thanks

Thanks, i know that was my bad with capitalization of Tearing, i was too lazy to recheck grammar :)

you're welcome

Thanks, your words makes me want to write more.

Hey gia2505. Your poem gave me chills, but thats agood thing. I like how you interpreted "The Scream". Your poem really undertakes the painting and brings out the pain in ...

Wow thank you very much! This means a lot for me.