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Re: h
Hey, ok i can only say such a cool story. This stories flow is just grate and easy readable, i liked how it jumped from Sal to Miranda. I liked ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Em101Cats's Life Tips!
Hey, I liked your poem, it is short but it says quite a lot. I really like the style in which it is written it takes me back. I liked ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Change is due
This is a grate poem and i liked it very much. I think i like the overall concept and it flows really grate although i had few places where i ...
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Dead Sea Son
Ok i don't even know with what to begin. Lets start with this- This is such a grate poem. Ok it took me few times to get in to it. ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Sweater Weather
Very short poem but it didn't need to be any longer. These four lines said completely every thing it should. I read it couple of times and it gave me ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: I was thinking yesterday.
Short poem but with a powerful message inside of it. I like your questions for your self and how you answer them. And i love the question in the end ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Granny
This poem reads very easily and i can feel what you wanted to say with it. Telling the truth i completely understand you. You have put down my feelings which ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: you will always come back wanting more
Wow. This is such a dark story, that gives me just creeps. I like how it begins lighter and then escalates to a darker place. My favorite part was the ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
It's a good story about growing up. It really captures that feeling when you want to grow up faster but the moment you do you understand that it's not what ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: The Musical Composition of Life
Really grate poem for a spur of a moment. Your poetry is easy reading yet emotionally powerful. I love how you compared life to an arrangement and God as a ...
Oct 19, 2014 -
Re: Broken Love
This is such a powerful poem who brings out your pain and makes everyone who reads it feel what you feel. It is painful and romantic which gives it a ...
Oct 19, 2014
