Elijah

King here This is so sweet! Such a sweet cake story. The rhymes are also very catchy and I caught myself singing this. Cake, cake and cakeeee. Were going to ...

King here First of all, I like the main messege of this work. As a poetry, it has potential and it could reach the reader if it was improved a ...

King here So, this was pretty emotional and strong in my opinion. It is like a letter to someone you deserve to come back to you, someone you love so ...

King here Hello there! I love this part also, I think of just going to the editing part right away because I am sure I will say nothing different from ...

King here Surely I will say nothing new to your ears but I really love this work and just wanted to tell you that this work is so relatable that ...

King here This work is very amazing even if I find it so sad. It makes you appreciate everything your mother have do and still does for you, her child, ...

King here Hello there, this second part was amazing! I found things that progressed to better and some stuff that stayed the same, needing a bit more into them. I ...

King here Here to review the second part! Please notify me on my wall when chapters get published! This masked boy is just full of mysteries which I love, I ...

King here Hello there! Your poetries as always hit me hard with the deep and emotional feelings put inside them. I have not been in such a situation, losing someone ...

King here Hello there! Such a sweet topic, butterflies! I also like the rhyme that softly harmonizes with the flow of the poetry. Usually I have problem with very short ...

King here My 400th review!!! The story caught me instantly because of its details and its plot. I can honestly say that at the very beginning, it sounded like a ...

King here I am glad to see that you still continue progressing and getting better and better. I was away for long and I do not know many of the ...

King here “I’d like a chai, please,” I said then I turned to her and silently asked what she wanted. “I’ll take one too,” she said. I know that he ...

King here This work is very emotional and full of sadness, showing that the person is left all alone. In this situation, the persona is you, I find this work ...

King here This short childhood memories story is very adorable and catch my eye even if it is beginning with very simple things like waking up. It kind of made ...