Elijah

That piece of art is amazing by itself but sometimes in some parts of it the rhyme seems forced and not suitable with the situation you are trying to grab ...

Such a cute and innocent poem I see here!The feeling is amazing!So bad that we can not all hug pandas now! XD I WANT PANDAAA NOOOWW! Your poem in fault. ...

I will be honest that I did not finished reading this really.I could not do it!I don't know why there were so many guestion marks and things that i could ...

Your details and all are amazing!The plot is interesting and made me read it till the end.I myself am fan of the horror/fantasy genre so it got me interested in ...

The plot is progressing well.Errors can be found.And sometimes the tenses are changing and we are having two tenses mixed together in one sentence.Small erorrs are thing that happens it ...

The story is interesting!Go on and continue it!I would love to see the next parts of it coming.I like the style in which you write.There are sentences who are just ...

I like the story a lot even if I myself got confused who had died and who did not in the end.Maybe I just need to read It all over ...

The fact was it hadn’t sunk in till now, she was going to fly, while being fired at. So many had lost their lives, and she could to. There are ...

You mixed the tenses a bit and one or two error was seen but it happens.You just need to give it a second look,you see?If we leave that aside,the story ...

I do not know can I count this as a short cute story or just a statement but I think you say everything right ahead with no hiding and this ...

It is pretty good and I think I can understand what you try to say us through it but still the idea or the thing you are writing for was ...

I think the plot is interesting by itself and even it is short it pretty satisfies is written well even if you could describe one or two things more than ...

Okey,it made me cry,i need to admit here!Anyway the story is short but tells so much by shows that the looks are not everything we need to be happy and ...

It is interesting!I still can't say i understand the whole situation there but i dont mind not knowing it all.This is the mystery i like after all!I like your main ...

This is actually a small piece of art.A masterpiece and i think it is made pretty well.While reading the rhyme is going well with the whole situation you are explaining ...