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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Little Princess

    Hey there, Eli here to review your short lovely story! It was a charming story of a little princess and her shadow-y protector, her guard in her life and the ...

    Jun 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Change

    Hey there! Eli here for another lovely review! The thing is that I start to have a crush on your poems and I really can not hide or deny it ...

    Jun 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Memory Lane

    Hey there! Eli here for a small review of your lovely poem. The work was short but very complex for me, it can be said for sure what the MC ...

    Jun 19, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Mermaid and her Shark (part one)

    Hey there! Eli here for a review of your piece! I did not expect the whole action to be actually underwater, I forgot about the title from the very beginning ...

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Short story

    Hey there! Eli here! Here is a review of your short story. It was a good read even if many things made me pause and re-think if I want to ...

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Literature, Fantasy Re: In the Dark I Have No Name

    Hey there! Eli here for a short lovely review of your work! The atmosphere of this story is so thrilling, it made me go on with reading it until the ...

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Bar/:(

    Hey there! Eli here for a review of your work! I will be taking parts of your work and sectioning them, they will be in orange below in this review. ...

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: A Stroll Through Purgatory

    Hey there! Eli here for a lovely review of your wonderful work! I will be honest when I say that this work really confused me when it came to its ...

    Jun 18, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Lady of the Night

    The story was amazing and so romantic. I am still shook that the prince so easily accepted his fate but maybe it is part of the Churel's charm? Or is ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Pink is a Distraction

    Hey there! Eli here for a lovely review on your work! It is was one wonderful small read for me as it had one hidden meaning which I understood a ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Mary, Do You Notice?

    Hey there! Eli here for a small chit chat review of your wonderful piece! From the very beginning, the piece sounds like a story of admiration of a beautiful girl ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: Beauty

    Hey there! Eli here for a short lovely review of your piece! The vibe of the piece is sad and maybe slightly miserable but it brings courage and understanding of ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 1

    Hey there, Eli here with a lovely review for you! The first part of this novel is pretty long, normal for a chapter though, so I read and put in ...

    Jun 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Diseased (Ch. 1)

    Hey there! Eli here with a lovely review! We will go through the story little by little, one review is already done but I want to make it my way ...

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest to Kolob Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey there! Eli here! Sweet review coming your way! It will include complains, discussion and all that chit chat. Unfortunately, I had more things to talk about in this story ...

    Jun 16, 2017


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