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Re: Little Princess
Hey there, Eli here to review your short lovely story! It was a charming story of a little princess and her shadow-y protector, her guard in her life and the ...
Jun 19, 2017 -
Re: Change
Hey there! Eli here for another lovely review! The thing is that I start to have a crush on your poems and I really can not hide or deny it ...
Jun 19, 2017 -
Re: Memory Lane
Hey there! Eli here for a small review of your lovely poem. The work was short but very complex for me, it can be said for sure what the MC ...
Jun 19, 2017 -
Re: The Mermaid and her Shark (part one)
Hey there! Eli here for a review of your piece! I did not expect the whole action to be actually underwater, I forgot about the title from the very beginning ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Short story
Hey there! Eli here! Here is a review of your short story. It was a good read even if many things made me pause and re-think if I want to ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: In the Dark I Have No Name
Hey there! Eli here for a short lovely review of your work! The atmosphere of this story is so thrilling, it made me go on with reading it until the ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: The Bar/:(
Hey there! Eli here for a review of your work! I will be taking parts of your work and sectioning them, they will be in orange below in this review. ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: A Stroll Through Purgatory
Hey there! Eli here for a lovely review of your wonderful work! I will be honest when I say that this work really confused me when it came to its ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Lady of the Night
The story was amazing and so romantic. I am still shook that the prince so easily accepted his fate but maybe it is part of the Churel's charm? Or is ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: Pink is a Distraction
Hey there! Eli here for a lovely review on your work! It is was one wonderful small read for me as it had one hidden meaning which I understood a ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: Mary, Do You Notice?
Hey there! Eli here for a small chit chat review of your wonderful piece! From the very beginning, the piece sounds like a story of admiration of a beautiful girl ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: Beauty
Hey there! Eli here for a short lovely review of your piece! The vibe of the piece is sad and maybe slightly miserable but it brings courage and understanding of ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 1
Hey there, Eli here with a lovely review for you! The first part of this novel is pretty long, normal for a chapter though, so I read and put in ...
Jun 17, 2017 -
Re: Diseased (Ch. 1)
Hey there! Eli here with a lovely review! We will go through the story little by little, one review is already done but I want to make it my way ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: Quest to Kolob Chapter 1 Part 1
Hey there! Eli here! Sweet review coming your way! It will include complains, discussion and all that chit chat. Unfortunately, I had more things to talk about in this story ...
Jun 16, 2017
