Elijah

Your work is beautiful and deep.You could feel the thoughts put in it and the whole idea of the work.A very good use of the language by makes the work ...

To be honest,not everything was perfect.Some verses were better than others and some did not catch my attention so much. Even if I said that,the whole lyrics..they are amazing.Your mistakes ...

I do not see this as one voice trying to sing these long and then these shorter parts! The same line repeated several times is something I had seen and ...

to break down you'r wall's hold you when you cry hug you when you'r hurt It is better this way : to break down your walls hold you when you ...

Well,this is just so funny and interesting. I honestly did not understand what the heck is that in very beginning but who cares for that.I continued reading and understood what ...

Well I do not know if you can count this as a review! But I can only say that it is truly beautiful and well shows that you know what ...

I am honest that i do not know what to say about this writing.I really like the idea you have but you need to detail it more? You start very ...

Hello hello! Raindrop here! Here for a short review. I honestly think of not adding anything bad about this art even if I am sure I will find something.The punctuation ...

Hello!Kinda the critical one here to review this! Hope I am helpful! This pen has power. I can feel its electrifying presence travel from my fingertips into some… Fuck. ( ...

I like the way you had written it. Me,myself,as a fantasy lover can say that I can not say bad things about someting that has this theme and also this ...

Hello there!Here to review your piece of writing! I hope I am helpful and this is not looking like a very short story so I will review and read at ...

There were some parts I could not get at the first glare. At the start the repeatment of the same line twice several times in this whole poetry was annoying ...

At the start it was weak but by reading further I started to understand what is going on. The expression,the passion of the feelings,the thoughts-I felt them all and I ...

The whole is pretty well written by its own self.The second paragraph from down to up was just.You know...You can see with one glare,it needs work.Some sentences there are too ...

Hey hey,Raindrop here! Will give you a fast holdfully usefull review now. Reading and reviewing at once. I regret what I did with, but I did it anyway because my ...