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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Strings That Pull On My Heart

    I like the way you use the word 'heart' somehow in both of these poetries that I reviewed till now. (this is the second and I reviewed one before this ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It's You

    Hello~! Trying to check some greenies from the green room one by one! So raindrop here to give you a short review. Let's start with the first thing of course.The ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Now She's Gone

    Hello hello, I am here,woman,here to review one of your works as promised! So let's start and I am sure you know I am really really picky about short stories. ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Under A Moonlit Tree

    I saw that this work has no review or comments at all so I came here to give it a try! Raindrop here for a short but still hopefully useful ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why Do I Want What's Bad For Me

    As a person who had gone through many emotions and situation similar to these which you are expressing in your work here, I understand and relate to this work.I like ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: It hurts, Ryu

    I like the emotions put it in and even if I did not know what you were talking about (from the tag that you had made there) I was going ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Tenkurion

    Hello,raindrop here for a short review (maybe will not be short but better this way)! So I am going to start with the things I like and end up with ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: My Name Is

    So this review will be quite short because the work of yours is short let's start with what I do not like in this short poetry: 1.I do not think ...

    Apr 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Random Poem

    Hello,hello! Raindrop finally here to review atleast one of your works before I call it a day..maybe this will be my last review for today! So let's go on with ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: What teenage life has taught me...

    I had seen several grammar mistakes I saw also that other reviewers had seen it not only me so you already know I am talking about in the describtion parts ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Intuition

    The first line felt really familiar.Well because it is used a lot as a starting line.But let's go over that and looked at the other part of this work. To ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Lyrics » Other, General Re: Darkness’ Silhouette

    I like the dark theme of this!Well,dark themes and the darkness catches my eye anyways but this is amazing.The rhyme is amazing and it shows the writer is a big ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: Deaf, Blind Love- Preface

    Even if kind of short this work is amazing and I find it really disappointing that this has only several reviewers and readers. So I think of just going ahead ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her.

    Overall,this will be a very short review to be honest because I do not think I felt anything bad or anything atleast I could complain about around this work.The style ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Her.

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    Apr 14, 2016


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia