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This is really good, powerful, and I think it captures the feelings of the soldiers realistically.

I saw more than nonsense in the ones I read. Maybe you weren't looking hard enough.

The amazing Maurice and his educated rodents, I've got that one! Firestsrter: I haven't read The Theif of Time, so I can't comment on that one, but if the books ...

Everything that they said! I liked it for all those reasons!

I liked that! It never... stopped? Don't know how to say it... it flowed nicely the whole thing... I'm not good at poetry. I liked the ending too!

I enjoyed it. Your flow is good, and the rhyming was so good you could barely tell it was there, it didn't sound forced or anything. :D

Forgot to say: Your dialogue was good! Well done, heaps of people find that difficult. And I liked the idea of the sword that helps her fight, but just make ...

There are better books by him than the colour of magic... one I just got was the Monstorous Regiment. Very very very very funny!

TV serises of books are usually lame. I once saw one on Terry Pratchets "Bromeliad" triliogy, which they made look boring, (which, if you've ever read the books, you'd know ...

... yeah, they do get repetitive, but I read them when I was younger, and I didn't care then.

I've only started writing poetry this month, so I'm not good at it, but I liked that! There were a few slight fixy up thingies that the others suggested that ...

Agreed, this is good!

Me niether, I havn't read them for... oh, must be two years now... but I will again sometime...

I loved the opening! I liked it. The gang stuff was interesting, and the description of New London. It's too bad the quotation marks were missing, their absence made it ...

... yes... there IS only one word to describe that... and it'a already been said! but I'll repeat it. POWERFUL.